7/13/2013 c10 14Assan-Mahariel
All these pokemon dead what about their trainers couldnt u of had them faint instead?

7/13/2013 c6 Assan-Mahariel
Wouldnt the pokemon be sad at least a little or are they brainwashed?

7/13/2013 c1 Assan-Mahariel
If he even tried to take my braviary, well my braviary is too strong 4 him

4/1/2003 c20 23Kitty-Kat Allie
O MY Gosh, im reading this story now, 4-1-03, and you stopped writing it like 2 years a go, what's the deal, continue! this is an awesome story, hurry up, i want to know what happens! plz! i can't beleive ash is so evil yet still so very ash, its heartbreaking, *sniff* i think im gonna go cry now!

Kitty-Kat Allie!

Meow! ;p

4/17/2002 c20 3ShiverDragon
blee, are you ever going to update? or shall I remove this one from my favorites?

12/8/2001 c1 ShiverDragon
hey, I used to love this story back when you put it on a messageboard I went to (before it went down that is...) well, anyway, I have finnaly caught up on it now that i've found it, and I must again rave on your fic's coolness! keep it up, I'll be waiting :)

10/3/2001 c19 69Alex Warlorn
To be frank, it's like you took Ash's old friends and companions and erased them from existence just to make ash more evil. (like they did in First Movie and MewTwo)

10/2/2001 c19 14Nicky4
Since you lost 30 reviews when you put this in chapters let me help you build them back up. This is pretty awesome. I like the idea of an evil Ash that seems to be something not often presented in fanfics. Keep up the good work.