for Evan Cullen12/26/2008 c6 
4No-Longer-Active12345
excuse me, why have you not updated in like 8 months? srsly? soo not cool- this story rox my sox and you just leave it hanging? no, not happening! i love it adn i will send you several virtual cookies and cakes and chocolates(which pains me cuz i love choco) but i will do it for you! if you continue soon!
plzplzplz!
4No-Longer-Active12345excuse me, why have you not updated in like 8 months? srsly? soo not cool- this story rox my sox and you just leave it hanging? no, not happening! i love it adn i will send you several virtual cookies and cakes and chocolates(which pains me cuz i love choco) but i will do it for you! if you continue soon!
plzplzplz!
6/6/2008 c6 Crecent-Moon16
I love this story. The characters, in my opinion, are well developed and like the story line.
I hope to see more. :)
Great work.
I love this story. The characters, in my opinion, are well developed and like the story line.
I hope to see more. :)
Great work.
5/20/2008 c6 9GeekGothHybrid
I really liked this chapter. Sparks flying with Even and Johnny. I think uncle Mark's a little over doing it but still I can see why. Nice dreams, people in black capes with hoods, thats nice. I don't really like Even, too arrogant, too full of himself. I think you made the "electricy" a little more promanent now then in the past, was this intentional? She really can't get away from Even, even if she wanted to, and she does. Like the title and ending.
9GeekGothHybridI really liked this chapter. Sparks flying with Even and Johnny. I think uncle Mark's a little over doing it but still I can see why. Nice dreams, people in black capes with hoods, thats nice. I don't really like Even, too arrogant, too full of himself. I think you made the "electricy" a little more promanent now then in the past, was this intentional? She really can't get away from Even, even if she wanted to, and she does. Like the title and ending.
5/19/2008 c6 1The Prettiest Wallflower
I swear i look forward to this story! Things are getting pretty odd between Evan and Rose. You are truly (i repeat) truly more than another fan fiction writer with an account, you are an author. Need that next chpt!
1The Prettiest WallflowerI swear i look forward to this story! Things are getting pretty odd between Evan and Rose. You are truly (i repeat) truly more than another fan fiction writer with an account, you are an author. Need that next chpt!
5/16/2008 c3 herlittlemonster
Brunette-in-Black-
This is Evan Cullen.
What a good chapter!
But, not to be mean or anything, Rose is a little...
8( you know?
She has a temper.
And that is a long name!
-Evan Cullen
Brunette-in-Black-
This is Evan Cullen.
What a good chapter!
But, not to be mean or anything, Rose is a little...
8( you know?
She has a temper.
And that is a long name!
-Evan Cullen
5/16/2008 c2 herlittlemonster
Brunette-in-Black-
This is Evan Cullen.
What a cool chapter. That is almost exactly how Bella and Edward met.
Deja Vu, well it was awesome!
-Evan Cullen
Brunette-in-Black-
This is Evan Cullen.
What a cool chapter. That is almost exactly how Bella and Edward met.
Deja Vu, well it was awesome!
-Evan Cullen
5/12/2008 c5 1The Prettiest Wallflower
... jacob is going to be that abuser huh? *sigh
hope not, *gasp! is he a werewolf in this!
wait! where is evan! is bella or edward in here!
i want that next chpt up!
PLZ!
1The Prettiest Wallflower... jacob is going to be that abuser huh? *sigh
hope not, *gasp! is he a werewolf in this!
wait! where is evan! is bella or edward in here!
i want that next chpt up!
PLZ!