for Becoming a Cullen7/10/2011 c1 Lilly
I like it can you please wrote more I love it
I like it can you please wrote more I love it
6/11/2011 c1 BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope
Your spelling is terrible. You have been reported.
The bad fic hater.
Your spelling is terrible. You have been reported.
The bad fic hater.
7/4/2010 c1 
2Emmauk26
great job, sounds promising so far looking forward to more, can't wait to see what happens next, update really soon.
2Emmauk26great job, sounds promising so far looking forward to more, can't wait to see what happens next, update really soon.
4/15/2009 c1 90elfmaiden4legs
Oh no, I can see whats coming and whats in stall for Bella already! I hope you decide to qrite more!
90elfmaiden4legsOh no, I can see whats coming and whats in stall for Bella already! I hope you decide to qrite more!
5/9/2008 c1 Sugababy87
Overall, the first chapter was good. It was a little short, but it does a good job of paving the way for the future chapters. I am anxious to see what kind of illness you are going to give Bella. The bruises make it a mystery. Very good! Can't wait for future chapters.
Overall, the first chapter was good. It was a little short, but it does a good job of paving the way for the future chapters. I am anxious to see what kind of illness you are going to give Bella. The bruises make it a mystery. Very good! Can't wait for future chapters.
5/8/2008 c1 6amobutterfly25
that could be cancer? maybe or some internal bleeding problems , idk either but you'll figure it out.
6amobutterfly25that could be cancer? maybe or some internal bleeding problems , idk either but you'll figure it out.