for Ninjas, Demons, and Hearts! Oh My!11/6/2009 c8 DarkBlueCloudAngel
awsome hey mabye you could put kira in here or L
idk
great story *favs*
awsome hey mabye you could put kira in here or L
idk
great story *favs*
8/2/2009 c8 
4breezy034
Aw, it's alright. We've all made mistakes in the past. I can't even look at the first few chapters of my first story. I think I'll rewrite it soon, even. That aside...
OMG!
YOU'RE ALIVE!
:D
God, I missed ya. Even though you think it really sucked, I think all it needs is a little polishing. That's my opinion, at least. *shrugs* Yeah, it probably wouldn't be a good idea to leave after you've found what you're looking for. But whatever; I wouldn't want to stick around without a plan, at least, so you could just build off your mistakes.
Heaven knows I have.
Glad to see you back!
4breezy034Aw, it's alright. We've all made mistakes in the past. I can't even look at the first few chapters of my first story. I think I'll rewrite it soon, even. That aside...
OMG!
YOU'RE ALIVE!
:D
God, I missed ya. Even though you think it really sucked, I think all it needs is a little polishing. That's my opinion, at least. *shrugs* Yeah, it probably wouldn't be a good idea to leave after you've found what you're looking for. But whatever; I wouldn't want to stick around without a plan, at least, so you could just build off your mistakes.
Heaven knows I have.
Glad to see you back!
8/2/2009 c7 Pink Tubby Custard
Great chapter! I can't wait until the next one! Please update soon! ^^
Great chapter! I can't wait until the next one! Please update soon! ^^
3/28/2009 c6 22OceanFae
If you dont finish typing this, I will cut your head off and feed it to my goblins. I NEED moar Jareth. NAOW.
22OceanFaeIf you dont finish typing this, I will cut your head off and feed it to my goblins. I NEED moar Jareth. NAOW.
8/24/2008 c6 4breezy034
Hehhehheh... love always seems to fall like a feather or a brick. The writing is getting much better. I'm lookin' forward to the next chapter!
4breezy034Hehhehheh... love always seems to fall like a feather or a brick. The writing is getting much better. I'm lookin' forward to the next chapter!
8/7/2008 c5 4breezy034
Hm... Well, this was a good chapter. Still, it seems a little... blunt. Like, the characters need more dialouge, and a few more details. Other than that blemish, I'm still loving the story!
4breezy034Hm... Well, this was a good chapter. Still, it seems a little... blunt. Like, the characters need more dialouge, and a few more details. Other than that blemish, I'm still loving the story!
8/6/2008 c4 9ViciousViper15
i love it! i only wish it was a tad longer. anyway, it is awesome and i hope you update soon!
9ViciousViper15i love it! i only wish it was a tad longer. anyway, it is awesome and i hope you update soon!
6/2/2008 c4 4breezy034
Like I siad very strong, and as far as I can tell, it's only getting better. I really like how you're putting the characters in their usual personalities. Tobi seemed quite strange. Anyway, keep it up!
4breezy034Like I siad very strong, and as far as I can tell, it's only getting better. I really like how you're putting the characters in their usual personalities. Tobi seemed quite strange. Anyway, keep it up!
5/29/2008 c1 breezy034
Hey, wait a sec? Am I the frist reviewer? So this was your first story on here? Not bad, not bad at all. I'd love to see more!
Hey, wait a sec? Am I the frist reviewer? So this was your first story on here? Not bad, not bad at all. I'd love to see more!