for Only the Children Weep7/18/2008 c1 
3stonerock333
That was pretty good.
It could have been a bit longer, but still, better than I could do. (As you've seen. lol.)
And you might be interested to know I plan on re-writing "Link's Nightmare." Not sure when, but soon.
Keep writing.
The Stone Man.
3stonerock333That was pretty good.
It could have been a bit longer, but still, better than I could do. (As you've seen. lol.)
And you might be interested to know I plan on re-writing "Link's Nightmare." Not sure when, but soon.
Keep writing.
The Stone Man.
5/13/2008 c1 31Firefury Amahira
Get out of my head! I swear, you nailed exactly my own thoughts about what all the time-hopping would do to Link in OoT. Excellently written, and while short, it still gets the point across, but without the overkill emo angst some people like to slap the Hero of Time with.
All in all, a pleasure to read :)
31Firefury AmahiraGet out of my head! I swear, you nailed exactly my own thoughts about what all the time-hopping would do to Link in OoT. Excellently written, and while short, it still gets the point across, but without the overkill emo angst some people like to slap the Hero of Time with.
All in all, a pleasure to read :)
5/12/2008 c1 1Red-Lynx
This story presents a marvelous insight into how Link may have felt being thrust into an adult world. I enjoyed it immensely. Good job!
1Red-LynxThis story presents a marvelous insight into how Link may have felt being thrust into an adult world. I enjoyed it immensely. Good job!
5/12/2008 c1 6Link's Ocarina Babe
I feel so sad after reading this about poor Link! And don't worry, you did an excellent job writing this piece.
6Link's Ocarina BabeI feel so sad after reading this about poor Link! And don't worry, you did an excellent job writing this piece.
5/12/2008 c1 Shadow Hylian
I really liked this fic as it provides some insight into the effects of the time travelling is having on Link.
I think that you have managed to put across the concept well, and the sentence structure and grammar is spot on.
I liked the way that Link is considering his journey so far and I think that his thoughts are conveyed well.
I also think that you have tied up the remainder of the game's stroyline well in the last paragraph as the repetition of the questions followed by "he didn't know" shows his uncertainty well.
Overall, I thought that this was quite a though-provoking and interesting piece. Good work! ^_^
I really liked this fic as it provides some insight into the effects of the time travelling is having on Link.
I think that you have managed to put across the concept well, and the sentence structure and grammar is spot on.
I liked the way that Link is considering his journey so far and I think that his thoughts are conveyed well.
I also think that you have tied up the remainder of the game's stroyline well in the last paragraph as the repetition of the questions followed by "he didn't know" shows his uncertainty well.
Overall, I thought that this was quite a though-provoking and interesting piece. Good work! ^_^