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7/5/2008 c3 Inukage-Okami
how cute!
5/20/2008 c5 17Artificial Life Creator
i think you're dead on with this chapter. Yachiru's probably the smartest person in the eleventh division if ya think about it. and the chapter was adorable!
5/20/2008 c1 4rinda
I agree that Yachiru always seems like an incredibly intelligent little girl but I wonder if Zaraki would have the patience to teach. Of course, he had the patience to raise her alone, which had to be challenging! I like your take on their relationship. It's tender but not sappy. :)
5/15/2008 c4 17Artificial Life Creator
last part be-th very cute, but sad, too!
5/15/2008 c3 Artificial Life Creator
aww! that was so cute!
5/15/2008 c2 Artificial Life Creator
i wonder how long it took yachiru to start talking
5/15/2008 c1 Artificial Life Creator
o.o crepy
5/14/2008 c4 4rinda
This is an interesting take on the history of Kenpachi Zaraki. I like it a lot. It gives a great depth to the character!
5/13/2008 c3 rinda
Wow! My first dedication. I'm honored...truly. And I really like this. It has a slow, easy feel and you've done a great job of capturing Zaraki's voice. It's tender and sweet. I like it a lot! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
5/12/2008 c2 rinda
This is interesting. I'm curious to see where you go with it. I like that you're writing from Yachiru's point of view for a change too! :)
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