for World Dyed BloodRed5/20/2008 c5 
17Artificial Life Creator
i think you're dead on with this chapter. Yachiru's probably the smartest person in the eleventh division if ya think about it. and the chapter was adorable!
17Artificial Life Creatori think you're dead on with this chapter. Yachiru's probably the smartest person in the eleventh division if ya think about it. and the chapter was adorable!
5/20/2008 c1 4rinda
I agree that Yachiru always seems like an incredibly intelligent little girl but I wonder if Zaraki would have the patience to teach. Of course, he had the patience to raise her alone, which had to be challenging! I like your take on their relationship. It's tender but not sappy. :)
4rindaI agree that Yachiru always seems like an incredibly intelligent little girl but I wonder if Zaraki would have the patience to teach. Of course, he had the patience to raise her alone, which had to be challenging! I like your take on their relationship. It's tender but not sappy. :)
5/14/2008 c4 4rinda
This is an interesting take on the history of Kenpachi Zaraki. I like it a lot. It gives a great depth to the character!
4rindaThis is an interesting take on the history of Kenpachi Zaraki. I like it a lot. It gives a great depth to the character!
5/13/2008 c3 rinda
Wow! My first dedication. I'm honored...truly. And I really like this. It has a slow, easy feel and you've done a great job of capturing Zaraki's voice. It's tender and sweet. I like it a lot! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Wow! My first dedication. I'm honored...truly. And I really like this. It has a slow, easy feel and you've done a great job of capturing Zaraki's voice. It's tender and sweet. I like it a lot! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
5/12/2008 c2 rinda
This is interesting. I'm curious to see where you go with it. I like that you're writing from Yachiru's point of view for a change too! :)
This is interesting. I'm curious to see where you go with it. I like that you're writing from Yachiru's point of view for a change too! :)