for Dark Intervention9/12/2013 c1 Darth Davha
more. more this story automatically peeked my interest . Please for the love of kami continue
more. more this story automatically peeked my interest . Please for the love of kami continue
2/9/2011 c1 SandyClaws93
Haku really doesnt know who he's dealing with :P. This is a very brilliant idea, having Tobi and Akatsuki make an appearance alot earlier in the story, even better in the wave arc with changes already being shown. I cannot tell how giddy it makes me whenever Tobi goes 'Madara Mode' on an unsuspecting character :D. It looks like this story isn't gonna have a continuation based on how long and how many stories you've updated and posted.
I hope you recieve some inspiration in this particular story since it would be a waste to see it abandoned. I cam never find a good Madara/Tobi story that doesnt involve humor or romance. Anyways, hope you update it sometime, or if not I thank you for atleast giving us an introduction of this brilliant story.
Haku really doesnt know who he's dealing with :P. This is a very brilliant idea, having Tobi and Akatsuki make an appearance alot earlier in the story, even better in the wave arc with changes already being shown. I cannot tell how giddy it makes me whenever Tobi goes 'Madara Mode' on an unsuspecting character :D. It looks like this story isn't gonna have a continuation based on how long and how many stories you've updated and posted.
I hope you recieve some inspiration in this particular story since it would be a waste to see it abandoned. I cam never find a good Madara/Tobi story that doesnt involve humor or romance. Anyways, hope you update it sometime, or if not I thank you for atleast giving us an introduction of this brilliant story.
8/2/2008 c1 
10PastaSentient
Wow, this is insane. I really like the way this is going. I love your version of madara. It should be interesting to see how the twelve year old sasuke would react to the "truth". Anyways, please update soon. I really like this so far. Are there going to be any pairing for this fic? Just curious. Btw, you might want to consider upping the rating. I have a feeling this is going to get pretty gruesome, so just in case... Update soon!
10PastaSentientWow, this is insane. I really like the way this is going. I love your version of madara. It should be interesting to see how the twelve year old sasuke would react to the "truth". Anyways, please update soon. I really like this so far. Are there going to be any pairing for this fic? Just curious. Btw, you might want to consider upping the rating. I have a feeling this is going to get pretty gruesome, so just in case... Update soon!
6/8/2008 c1 Ivanika
Awesome! Tobi/Madara rule ya!
This story even has Haku in it and Zabuza for the beginning.
You rule yo!
Hope you update soon
Awesome! Tobi/Madara rule ya!
This story even has Haku in it and Zabuza for the beginning.
You rule yo!
Hope you update soon
5/13/2008 c1 3HawkofLight
Wow, now this is a very interesting concept you have here. Having Tobi/Madara in the bridge battle and helping to observe with Zabuza and Haku is very original; in fact it's kinda rare to see a story that incorporates knowledge from the latest manga chapters so you've got me hooked. I'm particularly interested in where you're going to take the story from here as I was drawn in due to your summary. This chapter though was well-written and sets things up pretty nicely.
I look forward to any and all future updates.
3HawkofLightWow, now this is a very interesting concept you have here. Having Tobi/Madara in the bridge battle and helping to observe with Zabuza and Haku is very original; in fact it's kinda rare to see a story that incorporates knowledge from the latest manga chapters so you've got me hooked. I'm particularly interested in where you're going to take the story from here as I was drawn in due to your summary. This chapter though was well-written and sets things up pretty nicely.
I look forward to any and all future updates.
5/13/2008 c1 The Lizard Rebellion
very interesting. this seems like it could turn out to be quite the read. good luck with the chapters to come!
very interesting. this seems like it could turn out to be quite the read. good luck with the chapters to come!