for Perfect Proposal5/16/2008 c1 The MEAN Reviewer
First of all, misuse a comma once, and you've made a typo. Misuse a comma twice, and, well, you've still made a typo.
Misuse a comma more than that (I stopped counting after 28), and you've got to pull out your grammar books.
Cases in point:
- Set off keywords or names in greetings. It's not, "Hey Hermione". It's, "Hey, Hermione". Also, notice the commas in the following: "Oh, no"; "Thanks, Gin"; "Talk to you later, Gin, OK?" and "Well, thanks a lot."
- Use commas before the conjunction in compound sentences. Example: "I don't know what it is, BUT something just is."
- Notice the punctuation in the exchange below:
"Hi," she said.
"Hello," he replied warmly. "How are you?"
She smiled. "I'm great."
"That's good," he said, laughing.
She laughed, too. "Yeah, isn't it?"
"Isn't it?" he mimicked.
She just smiled even wider.
First of all, misuse a comma once, and you've made a typo. Misuse a comma twice, and, well, you've still made a typo.
Misuse a comma more than that (I stopped counting after 28), and you've got to pull out your grammar books.
Cases in point:
- Set off keywords or names in greetings. It's not, "Hey Hermione". It's, "Hey, Hermione". Also, notice the commas in the following: "Oh, no"; "Thanks, Gin"; "Talk to you later, Gin, OK?" and "Well, thanks a lot."
- Use commas before the conjunction in compound sentences. Example: "I don't know what it is, BUT something just is."
- Notice the punctuation in the exchange below:
"Hi," she said.
"Hello," he replied warmly. "How are you?"
She smiled. "I'm great."
"That's good," he said, laughing.
She laughed, too. "Yeah, isn't it?"
"Isn't it?" he mimicked.
She just smiled even wider.
25/14/2008 c1 Maru
Hi! I just love this fic, It's great! and i'd love to read the next one :D
sorry for my english, i'm from Argentina :)
Hi! I just love this fic, It's great! and i'd love to read the next one :D
sorry for my english, i'm from Argentina :)
5/14/2008 c1 eagansoccer38
Hey Rachel-
That was excellent!It was so cute, I think you really got the characters right. You should definately write more!
Okay well I have to go get ready for school, but really good job!
Hey Rachel-
That was excellent!It was so cute, I think you really got the characters right. You should definately write more!
Okay well I have to go get ready for school, but really good job!
5/13/2008 c1 rach
cool
cool