for Forbiden love7/19/2014 c1 lolmaster
not to be mean but your spelling is fucking terrible.
not to be mean but your spelling is fucking terrible.
5/21/2008 c1 
101reychop
Wow! That was emotional and very action-filled. I am a kyuuNaru fan too and I like it when they end up together yet the ending is vague, unclear and feels incomplete. It gives me time to think about the next events which in turns exercise my mind.
The sex is well described. Though it is unexplained why Sasuke cheated with Sakura, it's still a good thing since the mysteriousness and vagueness adds to it's elements and advantages as it arouses the reader's suspicions and curiosity. Well, I'd be waiting for a sequel so write more!
OH I almost forget you add my story Let the Love Begin in your favorite list. I would like to suggest that you add it to your alert list or just add me to your alert list so that whenever I update or add a chapter, you will be informed. Well see you later!
101reychopWow! That was emotional and very action-filled. I am a kyuuNaru fan too and I like it when they end up together yet the ending is vague, unclear and feels incomplete. It gives me time to think about the next events which in turns exercise my mind.
The sex is well described. Though it is unexplained why Sasuke cheated with Sakura, it's still a good thing since the mysteriousness and vagueness adds to it's elements and advantages as it arouses the reader's suspicions and curiosity. Well, I'd be waiting for a sequel so write more!
OH I almost forget you add my story Let the Love Begin in your favorite list. I would like to suggest that you add it to your alert list or just add me to your alert list so that whenever I update or add a chapter, you will be informed. Well see you later!
5/16/2008 c1 Gettenshi
That was a very good Chapter ^.^
I love the pairing KyuubixNaruto as much as I love GaaraxNaruto
The Story and the Sex scene was very good made ^-^
But I have a Question why is your Story not really Complete, I mean what happened after Kyuubi and Naruto had Sex? Will Naruto be a Demon like Kyuubi, will he be pregnant and what is with Konoha, how will they react if their see that Kyuubi is not Sealed anymore and that Naruto is his Mate? Will Sasuke and Sakura feel regrets or will they be so warm like a iceberg? And will all found out that Naruto is the son of Minato Namikaze, the Yondaime, and Kushina Uzumaki etc.
That was a very good Chapter ^.^
I love the pairing KyuubixNaruto as much as I love GaaraxNaruto
The Story and the Sex scene was very good made ^-^
But I have a Question why is your Story not really Complete, I mean what happened after Kyuubi and Naruto had Sex? Will Naruto be a Demon like Kyuubi, will he be pregnant and what is with Konoha, how will they react if their see that Kyuubi is not Sealed anymore and that Naruto is his Mate? Will Sasuke and Sakura feel regrets or will they be so warm like a iceberg? And will all found out that Naruto is the son of Minato Namikaze, the Yondaime, and Kushina Uzumaki etc.