for Grav7/18/2016 c6 llazo4108824
This is so sweet of them to together and please make more chapters soon please.
This is so sweet of them to together and please make more chapters soon please.
6/7/2016 c6 
3BBCDP2
I really liked your story and thank you for writing about one of my favorite couples in a positive way :D (even if you made Eiri more lovey-dovey, It was still a good read for me) keep it up and yeah. BYE _
3BBCDP2I really liked your story and thank you for writing about one of my favorite couples in a positive way :D (even if you made Eiri more lovey-dovey, It was still a good read for me) keep it up and yeah. BYE _
11/28/2013 c1 Honest Review
promising! : I hoped it had a promising plot needs more solidity in it though. P.S THE TYPING/WRITING style has to change, put some spaces between sentences/ and avoid run down sentences like too much thoughts in one sentence. But nevertheless this one is good! hands down! :)
promising! : I hoped it had a promising plot needs more solidity in it though. P.S THE TYPING/WRITING style has to change, put some spaces between sentences/ and avoid run down sentences like too much thoughts in one sentence. But nevertheless this one is good! hands down! :)
9/28/2013 c1 ImagineYou
I was too lazy to log in on my account...
Anyways, I didn't get far reading this. Your sentences are too long. Use the dot more often. U use comma in places where it's not meant to be. I'd advice you to go check up how to construct sentences and how to use dots and commas.
I was too lazy to log in on my account...
Anyways, I didn't get far reading this. Your sentences are too long. Use the dot more often. U use comma in places where it's not meant to be. I'd advice you to go check up how to construct sentences and how to use dots and commas.
7/8/2013 c6 Lulubelle
Fricking wonderful! I love it so so so so sk much. PLEASE CONTINUE VERY SOON
-Lulubelle the Cat
Fricking wonderful! I love it so so so so sk much. PLEASE CONTINUE VERY SOON
-Lulubelle the Cat
5/8/2013 c6 Redthorn13
AWWW! this chap was really sweet and sex on a ferris wheel thats a new one for me haha
AWWW! this chap was really sweet and sex on a ferris wheel thats a new one for me haha
5/6/2013 c6 9Tenpou
Hey, I'm not use to read fanfiction in english but when I read the introduction sentance of your story it catched my attention... and finally I'm glad to have read your fiction, it was really good and easy to understand for me. I hope you'll continue and read you again !
Bybye
9TenpouHey, I'm not use to read fanfiction in english but when I read the introduction sentance of your story it catched my attention... and finally I'm glad to have read your fiction, it was really good and easy to understand for me. I hope you'll continue and read you again !
Bybye
3/9/2013 c4 yuna
Love it's chap 5 please. By the way how old shuichi?
Love it's chap 5 please. By the way how old shuichi?
3/3/2013 c4 Guest
Think...you posted the wrong chapter to the wrong story.
Think...you posted the wrong chapter to the wrong story.
3/3/2013 c4 Guest
I like the way this story is going so far, but in Chapter 4, I'm confused. Is this supposed to be a crossover story with Ouran High School Host Club?
I like the way this story is going so far, but in Chapter 4, I'm confused. Is this supposed to be a crossover story with Ouran High School Host Club?