for Mutilated6/4/2009 c1 
23you.just.got.STORMed
omgosh- that was so sad! ='(
awesome work, your writing is excellent... somehow the style just completely captured all the emotions.
is there going to be more random oneshots?
23you.just.got.STORMedomgosh- that was so sad! ='(
awesome work, your writing is excellent... somehow the style just completely captured all the emotions.
is there going to be more random oneshots?
10/31/2008 c1 DELETEDACCOUNT453637119927
This is amazing. I don't think that Mary Hoffman could have done better! It's really nice and upsetting. I think you should write more stuff!
This is amazing. I don't think that Mary Hoffman could have done better! It's really nice and upsetting. I think you should write more stuff!
6/30/2008 c1 delly
very, very good. i like this version-especially the ending. it makes everything fit together perfectly! great job! =)
very, very good. i like this version-especially the ending. it makes everything fit together perfectly! great job! =)
6/9/2008 c1 15callistana
Perfect. This story was just perfect. I can't say much more than that, really. I'm adding this to my favourites. x
15callistanaPerfect. This story was just perfect. I can't say much more than that, really. I'm adding this to my favourites. x
6/1/2008 c1 KC
i like it its cool n sticks to wot the story said :D
i like it its cool n sticks to wot the story said :D
5/22/2008 c1 lazy
It's very good. I really like the insight it gives. You should write more.
It's very good. I really like the insight it gives. You should write more.
5/19/2008 c1 4Hallahiliel
Wow. That was really good. Almost made me cry. There are a few grammical errors though, but that's just me being picky! =)
Keep up the good work!
4HallahilielWow. That was really good. Almost made me cry. There are a few grammical errors though, but that's just me being picky! =)
Keep up the good work!