
11/20/2012 c3 Random Chick
Nationhood? You seriously need to work on your grammar and spelling mistakes, it's getting rather annoying. Otherwise your story is really good. You just need to polish it a bit.
Nationhood? You seriously need to work on your grammar and spelling mistakes, it's getting rather annoying. Otherwise your story is really good. You just need to polish it a bit.
11/20/2012 c2 Random Chick
Where is Lee, Naruto, Kiba, and Shino at the resturaunt scene? By the way you have a lot of spelling mistakes.
Where is Lee, Naruto, Kiba, and Shino at the resturaunt scene? By the way you have a lot of spelling mistakes.
5/12/2012 c6
4KyuubiFreak
Update please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please!

Update please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please!
6/14/2009 c6
510wolves
Oy, I love this story! Please, update! I'm sure that mind of yours can think of something!

Oy, I love this story! Please, update! I'm sure that mind of yours can think of something!
9/24/2008 c6
3phobosapollo
please update, i need to know if my bro's ok. pweese? *does ultimate puppy dog look of DOOM*

please update, i need to know if my bro's ok. pweese? *does ultimate puppy dog look of DOOM*
9/24/2008 c5 phobosapollo
i think i'm gonna cry. naru-kun's my OC's adopted brother, this shouldn't happen to him!
i think i'm gonna cry. naru-kun's my OC's adopted brother, this shouldn't happen to him!
9/14/2008 c6 NeckoFury
Why isn't that evil incarante of a devil woman dead yet ... i just want to know? Looking forward to you next update.
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Why isn't that evil incarante of a devil woman dead yet ... i just want to know? Looking forward to you next update.
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9/14/2008 c5 NeckoFury
I'm still very sad ...but it is good story... remember ..torture ...13 yrs...kill slowly...oK!
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I'm still very sad ...but it is good story... remember ..torture ...13 yrs...kill slowly...oK!
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9/14/2008 c4 NeckoFury
I'm really sad now...
I'm really sad now...
9/14/2008 c3 NeckoFury
Really you should torture that woman for like 13 years then kill her slowly. Really u should.
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Really you should torture that woman for like 13 years then kill her slowly. Really u should.
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