for Zero Tolerance11/4/2019 c1 Guest
Loved the story! Thank you! E.
Loved the story! Thank you! E.
10/10/2018 c1 
32Pharies
I look forward to reading the rest in the series. This was incredibly well written. Good job )
~Tori
32PhariesI look forward to reading the rest in the series. This was incredibly well written. Good job )
~Tori
10/3/2017 c1 Angel Wick
Omg! Sorry. U did right. Allow me say.
OMG! ZERO AND YUKI IN LOVE! FINALLY!
Omg! Sorry. U did right. Allow me say.
OMG! ZERO AND YUKI IN LOVE! FINALLY!
9/13/2017 c1 A fan
WOW! Your story is compelling, electric, eloquent. I love it. You could write your own romantic fiction and I would buy it. Keep writing.
WOW! Your story is compelling, electric, eloquent. I love it. You could write your own romantic fiction and I would buy it. Keep writing.
3/14/2017 c1 Anonymous
Just wow, the describing of 'everything' was amazing
Just wow, the describing of 'everything' was amazing
10/15/2015 c1 4Cricketsong.1985
I enjoyed this story a lot and will add it to my favourites. It was a little heavy on the adjectives at times, but also flowed really well and had a great ending. :)
4Cricketsong.1985I enjoyed this story a lot and will add it to my favourites. It was a little heavy on the adjectives at times, but also flowed really well and had a great ending. :)
6/22/2015 c1 Guest
Fantastically written. Well done. I'm normally not into suck graphic fanfiction but your sentence structure was on point and your words choices were fantastic. The way you described things was erotic yet poetic. Really well done, good job.
Fantastically written. Well done. I'm normally not into suck graphic fanfiction but your sentence structure was on point and your words choices were fantastic. The way you described things was erotic yet poetic. Really well done, good job.
1/19/2015 c1 ZeroYuki 4ever
I know this is 2015 now and this was written in 2008 but I just found this and I have to say, daaaaammmmmnnnn! I think I have a new favorite fanfiction
I know this is 2015 now and this was written in 2008 but I just found this and I have to say, daaaaammmmmnnnn! I think I have a new favorite fanfiction
1/1/2015 c1 5Angaradh
Damn ! Really hot and vampiric sexy time. It's a fantastic job you've done here. Thanks !
5AngaradhDamn ! Really hot and vampiric sexy time. It's a fantastic job you've done here. Thanks !
10/29/2014 c1 Guest
Jesus Christ...It would be a SIN if you didn't continue so beautifully written and perfectly put together that once i started reading I COULD'NT STOP! Your diction is marvelous and your scenery and character personalities are...just perfect. I love your work PLEASE KEEP GOING! 3
Jesus Christ...It would be a SIN if you didn't continue so beautifully written and perfectly put together that once i started reading I COULD'NT STOP! Your diction is marvelous and your scenery and character personalities are...just perfect. I love your work PLEASE KEEP GOING! 3
10/7/2014 c1 3kittykatxox
I realize this is from 2008, but I wanted to leave a quick review since I just discovered this fic and have read it like five times in the last couple weeks. I smile every time, multiple times, and I'm sure I will read it again. Your Zero and Yuuki are perfectly written, and your Zero makes me drool. I am usually a fan of Yuuki/Kaname, but you may be changing my mind... Amazing, great, superb work.
3kittykatxoxI realize this is from 2008, but I wanted to leave a quick review since I just discovered this fic and have read it like five times in the last couple weeks. I smile every time, multiple times, and I'm sure I will read it again. Your Zero and Yuuki are perfectly written, and your Zero makes me drool. I am usually a fan of Yuuki/Kaname, but you may be changing my mind... Amazing, great, superb work.