for Love Never Lost3/4/2014 c17 love-twilight
Your story is amazing, but the italian part is completely wrong:
Father, father, catch me if you can - papa, papa, prendimi se puoi
You silly girl - ragazza sciocca
mother, father, can I sing a song? - mama, papa, posso cantare una canzone?
Your story is amazing, but the italian part is completely wrong:
Father, father, catch me if you can - papa, papa, prendimi se puoi
You silly girl - ragazza sciocca
mother, father, can I sing a song? - mama, papa, posso cantare una canzone?
12/5/2011 c22 Amber
amazing! amzing! amazing! hurry up and post another chapter!
amazing! amzing! amazing! hurry up and post another chapter!
8/5/2011 c15 Blackrosenothingness
This sounds like it's set in the 21st century! Not 1918! Your timeline is completely off. Another thing, your characters have no emotions. Nobody cares if their parents are dead, they just go off happily skipping thru fields of flowers. Your story is just not realistic.
This sounds like it's set in the 21st century! Not 1918! Your timeline is completely off. Another thing, your characters have no emotions. Nobody cares if their parents are dead, they just go off happily skipping thru fields of flowers. Your story is just not realistic.
8/3/2011 c21 stephi910
good to see a new chapter up, but can't say that i enjoy reading about men forcing themselves on women...hope that's as far as cayden takes it.
good to see a new chapter up, but can't say that i enjoy reading about men forcing themselves on women...hope that's as far as cayden takes it.
8/12/2010 c20 Ashleigh
This story is absolutely amazing. I have been glued to the computer screen reading the past 20 chapters. All I have to say is UPDATE! :D
This story is absolutely amazing. I have been glued to the computer screen reading the past 20 chapters. All I have to say is UPDATE! :D
7/4/2010 c20 
5LiteraryRomantic
I normally really cannot stand stories where Bella is part of the Volturi, but I will be completely honest and say I am really enjoying this. Do you plan on continuing? If so, please update soon.
5LiteraryRomanticI normally really cannot stand stories where Bella is part of the Volturi, but I will be completely honest and say I am really enjoying this. Do you plan on continuing? If so, please update soon.
5/2/2010 c8 3GirlieGirl101
They are making Maximum Ride into a movie? YES!
AWESOME STORY, BY THE WAY! :P
3GirlieGirl101They are making Maximum Ride into a movie? YES!
AWESOME STORY, BY THE WAY! :P
4/10/2010 c12 3CardbordCutoutJacobsGirlfriend
ur an awesome writer but when they all die i think it was lacking some emotion like it was kinda like she just blew it all off if u no wat i mean otherwise if it helps i hav been cryin the whole time so sad but i think there stil could be more emotion
3CardbordCutoutJacobsGirlfriendur an awesome writer but when they all die i think it was lacking some emotion like it was kinda like she just blew it all off if u no wat i mean otherwise if it helps i hav been cryin the whole time so sad but i think there stil could be more emotion
4/10/2010 c20 Anna
that was soo good! when is the next chapter?
that was soo good! when is the next chapter?
4/10/2010 c7 CardbordCutoutJacobsGirlfriend
i noticed something u might want 2 fix in this ch. bella says:
"Why thank you Mr. CULLEN. I expect that it will taste absolutely superb."
idk wat gonna hapen l8r but i though t he was mr.Masen
i noticed something u might want 2 fix in this ch. bella says:
"Why thank you Mr. CULLEN. I expect that it will taste absolutely superb."
idk wat gonna hapen l8r but i though t he was mr.Masen
3/27/2010 c11 jacqueline222
:( omg that is so sad...but very well written.
:( omg that is so sad...but very well written.
3/27/2010 c1 Jacqueline222
all i can say so far is...AW
all i can say so far is...AW