for The Man at the Piano5/25/2008 c1 
14heatherberry
Hey, that was very nice, really good idea about booth being musical, I can definitely see that - and your dialogue for them was spot on. our description of the police man at the beginning was good too - I was able to clearly picture the type of person you met...would be good to see you continue this!
Be aware teeny spoiler IS in there though (the bath)! I look forward to reading you other when I've seen pain the the Heart!
14heatherberryHey, that was very nice, really good idea about booth being musical, I can definitely see that - and your dialogue for them was spot on. our description of the police man at the beginning was good too - I was able to clearly picture the type of person you met...would be good to see you continue this!
Be aware teeny spoiler IS in there though (the bath)! I look forward to reading you other when I've seen pain the the Heart!
5/22/2008 c1 gibbsbones
Hey! Great story. Although, I felt like you could keep going at the end. It seemed to end kind of abrubtly. But I still enjoyed it!
Hey! Great story. Although, I felt like you could keep going at the end. It seemed to end kind of abrubtly. But I still enjoyed it!
5/21/2008 c1 9Delilah Song
Aw, such a fluffy sweet piece!
It made me smile, and I loved the song choices, and how Brennan's like "Duh, it's the SCIENTIST" xD
I also loved how you described the emotion, and a nice plot idea too!
9Delilah SongAw, such a fluffy sweet piece!
It made me smile, and I loved the song choices, and how Brennan's like "Duh, it's the SCIENTIST" xD
I also loved how you described the emotion, and a nice plot idea too!
5/21/2008 c1 Ash211230
Aww! That was good! Please tell me that this wasn't a one-shot.
Please continue this. :-( Please
~Ash
Aww! That was good! Please tell me that this wasn't a one-shot.
Please continue this. :-( Please
~Ash