for Forbidden Love2/14/2009 c2 
1EdwardCullenIsStaringAtYou
hey
err...well i didnt spell update on the other chapter properly... but...yah the plot thickens...you better update girl! lol longer chapters needed! (still amazing though!)
1EdwardCullenIsStaringAtYouhey
err...well i didnt spell update on the other chapter properly... but...yah the plot thickens...you better update girl! lol longer chapters needed! (still amazing though!)
2/14/2009 c1 EdwardCullenIsStaringAtYou
teehee lol urine...
ahem...anyways, im slightly confused but loving this story! Makes me almost wish i watched bones...lol..check out this booth guy! Uodate soon
teehee lol urine...
ahem...anyways, im slightly confused but loving this story! Makes me almost wish i watched bones...lol..check out this booth guy! Uodate soon
5/30/2008 c1 5PintSizeGenius
Hey! Good start! I like it! Can't wait to see where you go with this! Keep it up! PSG x
5PintSizeGeniusHey! Good start! I like it! Can't wait to see where you go with this! Keep it up! PSG x
5/28/2008 c1 4DrTBrennan
I love your idea.
I wish I came up with it.
Anyways, I can't wait to read the next chappie.
Keep on writing! ^^
4DrTBrennanI love your idea.
I wish I came up with it.
Anyways, I can't wait to read the next chappie.
Keep on writing! ^^
5/26/2008 c1 31jremme
I am doing as told and R&Ring! =) Interesting start; I can't wait to see where you go with this. It's all very mysterious, and the setup you're starting is intriguing. Keep going with it!
31jremmeI am doing as told and R&Ring! =) Interesting start; I can't wait to see where you go with this. It's all very mysterious, and the setup you're starting is intriguing. Keep going with it!
5/24/2008 c1 23ewriter
I love it, Put castaway and bones together though and you'll be like a godess.
23ewriterI love it, Put castaway and bones together though and you'll be like a godess.
5/23/2008 c1 3accaliarue
There is so much that I don't know where to start
1. Author Notes in fics never work well, they interrupt the flow of the story.
2. If you tell your audience that you will not post another chapter until you get the amount of reviews you like, no one will ever respond.
3. Always spell out words instead of writing them numerically ("Asked the castaway after 1 sip before finishing the cup")
4. Please try to proofread your fic through spell check, also make sure the tense is agreeable.
Please do not take this as a flame, I am only trying to give constructive feedback.
3accaliarueThere is so much that I don't know where to start
1. Author Notes in fics never work well, they interrupt the flow of the story.
2. If you tell your audience that you will not post another chapter until you get the amount of reviews you like, no one will ever respond.
3. Always spell out words instead of writing them numerically ("Asked the castaway after 1 sip before finishing the cup")
4. Please try to proofread your fic through spell check, also make sure the tense is agreeable.
Please do not take this as a flame, I am only trying to give constructive feedback.