for The legend of Hogwarts7/31/2008 c9 
1WholeWheatBeats
yay, Non Midink! :D Never really liked that pair...
Although mischevious Midna is kinda cool :P
1WholeWheatBeatsyay, Non Midink! :D Never really liked that pair...
Although mischevious Midna is kinda cool :P
7/13/2008 c6 2it's all or nothing
very nice although it seemed sped up. But its all good. Very nice indeed!
2it's all or nothingvery nice although it seemed sped up. But its all good. Very nice indeed!
7/9/2008 c6 7faolan228
Ooh, possible Sheik/Link/Zelda triangle? That is NICE right there! ^_^
Keep up the good work, cuz this story is getting more and more interesting.
7faolan228Ooh, possible Sheik/Link/Zelda triangle? That is NICE right there! ^_^
Keep up the good work, cuz this story is getting more and more interesting.
7/9/2008 c6 2Burlesque Romantique
This is really good, but perhaps can you make it longer? It would just be more fun to read. Great story and keep up the good work!
2Burlesque RomantiqueThis is really good, but perhaps can you make it longer? It would just be more fun to read. Great story and keep up the good work!
6/30/2008 c5 2it's all or nothing
very, VERY interesting. I need to know what happens next! Write more right NOW!
2it's all or nothingvery, VERY interesting. I need to know what happens next! Write more right NOW!
6/23/2008 c4 2Burlesque Romantique
This is great, and I'm really glad that you added Zelda! Sheik and Dark are funny to read, it's so fun!
2Burlesque RomantiqueThis is great, and I'm really glad that you added Zelda! Sheik and Dark are funny to read, it's so fun!
6/23/2008 c4 Own.Little.World
great job! I loved it! I just have 1 question: Is Sheik his or her own character? Well thats sort of two questions but, anyway love the story!
great job! I loved it! I just have 1 question: Is Sheik his or her own character? Well thats sort of two questions but, anyway love the story!
6/21/2008 c3 2it's all or nothing
OMG OMG OMG! Finally, this is the reason why i read fanfiction, YOU are the reason why i read fanfiction! I would go sheik all the way, and do something that shadow link will double cross link and make a battle scene from that! Im lovin it! Im putting it for faves!
2it's all or nothingOMG OMG OMG! Finally, this is the reason why i read fanfiction, YOU are the reason why i read fanfiction! I would go sheik all the way, and do something that shadow link will double cross link and make a battle scene from that! Im lovin it! Im putting it for faves!
6/15/2008 c3 Own.Little.World
Bring in Sheik! or Zelda...even though she's not on the choice list. Cool story!
Bring in Sheik! or Zelda...even though she's not on the choice list. Cool story!
6/11/2008 c3 5possessed obsession
Umm, this sentence - “He might even have a family in Hyrule!” Professor McGonagall was now on the burst to tears. - sounds a bit wierd at the end. While it get's the point across, 'was now on the burst to tears' just sets my inner grammer nazi off. You might want to put instead, 'Professor McGonagall was close to bursting into tears', or 'Professor McGonagall was about to burst into tears'. See what I mean? I'm not trying to be rude, I just noticed that and wanted to point it out. Otherwise, great chapter! I love how you got it out so fast!
Keep up the good work~
Possessed Obsession
5possessed obsessionUmm, this sentence - “He might even have a family in Hyrule!” Professor McGonagall was now on the burst to tears. - sounds a bit wierd at the end. While it get's the point across, 'was now on the burst to tears' just sets my inner grammer nazi off. You might want to put instead, 'Professor McGonagall was close to bursting into tears', or 'Professor McGonagall was about to burst into tears'. See what I mean? I'm not trying to be rude, I just noticed that and wanted to point it out. Otherwise, great chapter! I love how you got it out so fast!
Keep up the good work~
Possessed Obsession