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12/16/2020 c46 5sunlightstars
This is my second read of this and I have to say, I still love it as much as I did the first time! I would honestly like to see another story similar to this with Severus/Harry if you write that pairing!
5/26/2019 c16 Property.of.a.DeadGirl4-25
I used to love this story and you'll always be one of my faves, but reading it again as an adult has me wanting Lucius' pedophilic rapist ass head on a spike. Poor Harry deserves so much better than being groomed by that pos
5/9/2019 c1 nessiesmith2012
Wow talk abou 0 to 60 in a split is starting to look like porn without plot the way by end of first chapter hes spilling his secrets and accepting a tongue down his throat with someone he was 'supposivly' wanted nothing to do with.
2/22/2019 c1 bluedogg07
i think im going to like this a i dont like very many things
10/23/2018 c4 CharitinaX
Wow what the fuck this story went from cute, vintage summer by the beach to really fucked up real quick
9/17/2018 c46 Guest
First of all, it's LOSE not LOOSE. It's LOSING, not LOOSING. They're two completely different words, please look it up ffs.

This was honestly disgusting to read and I had to give up. You forced Harry to be with a rapist who cannot possibly love him, and everyone around him is out of their minds for supporting that. Normally I support OOC stories for the sake of making interesting plots possible, but this was just not right.

I know this story is old and you probably don't give a crap, but take this story down or put up some proper warnings. Also, get a beta or learn how to write better.
1/23/2018 c46 HoneyBear84
Loved it, but wish ur Harry/Lucius and Harry/Severus and Harry/Sev/Luc didn't always start with Harry being hurt/raped by them
10/12/2017 c4 Guest
I'm stopping here. The fact that Harry and
Lucius are going to end up together disgusts me. Lucius is a rapist and paedophile. He is manipulating the situation and forcing Harry againat his will. I read reviews for later chapters to see if this changes and i can see that honestly see it never does. Lucius claims to love Harry but continues to rape him and somehow Harry getting pregnant and Lucius saying he did all because he cares is supposed to be an excuse? This is not love. When there is no consent there can be no relationship and the fact that Harry is being absused by a man older than his parents makes him vulnerable. I saw a few people calling Harry an idiot for showing up but that is both callous and ignorant. Manipulation like this is used by abusers constantly, especially when the victim is underage. I can't read 40 chapters about how rape is really romantic and victims should sympathize and forgive them as long as they claim to love them
12/28/2016 c1 15Tymara
Hello !
First of all, sorry if I do mistakes in my english, but I'm French so...
Then, OMG, your story is amazing ! I only red few chapters but I love it ! I did know the erastes' tradition before but the way you use it is genius !
That's why I send you this review : I wanted to know if you would give me your agreement to permit me to translate your story in French... I am already translating the first chapter to try and be sure I could do it, before asking for your authorization. Now, I just would like to continue translating 2 or 3 chapters before starting publishing the story on my own account, if you are okay with it... Of course, I will tel this is your story and I am only the translator ! But, well, it would be fantastic to have your agreement...
Fine, I don't know if everything is very clear, but I hope you got the message...
I hope you will be okay !
Tymara
10/26/2016 c1 2Cartlin
WTF, Severus gets that this is Harry's HOME, and he's just a GUEST, right? Because that was so freaking rude and presumptuous it's not funny!
9/16/2016 c46 alinefgs
Adorei essa fic bjs
7/7/2016 c46 1414artemis14
WHAT WAS THE GENDER OF THE BABYYYYYYYYYYYYY
but great job.
It was slow at times but by the end of the day u get a 10/10
6/26/2016 c5 1BlackDoctor
Well, I feel bad for harry you know. but how can a victim like him, doesnt even realize when its time to accept or decline, when to strike or hold on. he had the power to decline the offer, but no he just cant stop being stupid and accept it anyway. he chose this, so well its your doom
4/8/2016 c29 2ZianaSue
i predict deja vu.
1/16/2016 c41 1cookiemonsta605
Okay this chapter completely pissed me off. I get Luc was the bad guy at first but he has proven time and time again that he loves Harry and wants him but Harry has always voiced not wanting children with him and he doesn't love him and doesn't wanna be in a loveless marriage. He even found out he was pregnant and told everyone but Luscious so when he gives Harry the papers he now the bad guy again...I'm okay no that's fucked up and the fact that no one is on his side or even asking why he did what he did was stupid. They are all so eager to back Harry when HARRY is in the wrong in this chapter.. ? Whatever
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