
1/23/2010 c1
2k+Hawki
-Bit of a stop-start sense at the start but the fic finds its rhythem quickly, especially with the Doctor's musings on the Last Great Time War.
-Neat idea with the Doctor teaching Martha about time, but I can't help but wonder if it's safe-Donna comes to mind. Still, good job overall and I agree with you when it comes to DonnaxTen (friends is fine) and TenxAstrid (bit too soon IMO).

-Bit of a stop-start sense at the start but the fic finds its rhythem quickly, especially with the Doctor's musings on the Last Great Time War.
-Neat idea with the Doctor teaching Martha about time, but I can't help but wonder if it's safe-Donna comes to mind. Still, good job overall and I agree with you when it comes to DonnaxTen (friends is fine) and TenxAstrid (bit too soon IMO).
12/2/2009 c1 passed
'Five reviews will earn you chapter two...' Update please? I quite enjoyed it! :)
'Five reviews will earn you chapter two...' Update please? I quite enjoyed it! :)
12/13/2008 c1 mrs mathis
IF YOU COULD, PLEASE WRITE MORE 10/MARTHA STORIES. I'M A BIG FAN OF YOUR WORK
IF YOU COULD, PLEASE WRITE MORE 10/MARTHA STORIES. I'M A BIG FAN OF YOUR WORK
8/31/2008 c1
12LunaSolTierra
I love this chapter. It's brilliant and has my favorite pairing Ten/Martha. I like the idea of the Doctor and the TARDIS teaching Martha how to understand time. I always felt that Martha and the TARDIS had a special bond ever since 1913 when Martha would visit the TARDIS on her time off. I saw seven reviews and with this one is eight. So I hope to see a second chapter soon. Great work.

I love this chapter. It's brilliant and has my favorite pairing Ten/Martha. I like the idea of the Doctor and the TARDIS teaching Martha how to understand time. I always felt that Martha and the TARDIS had a special bond ever since 1913 when Martha would visit the TARDIS on her time off. I saw seven reviews and with this one is eight. So I hope to see a second chapter soon. Great work.
6/7/2008 c1 anitarose
it would be better if you would continue...I hate cliffhangers...and, for the record, I'm a 10/Martha shipper, I guess. I started watching again during 9/Rose, but I'm a humongeous fan of Tom Baker (4th Doctor) and was watching Dr Who when most everyone here was either in nappies or being thought of...
Please hurry this story along, my friend...
a.
it would be better if you would continue...I hate cliffhangers...and, for the record, I'm a 10/Martha shipper, I guess. I started watching again during 9/Rose, but I'm a humongeous fan of Tom Baker (4th Doctor) and was watching Dr Who when most everyone here was either in nappies or being thought of...
Please hurry this story along, my friend...
a.
5/30/2008 c1
12Madame Beret
YAY, fith review!
I like this...I wanna learn too!
Would be kinda cool if they went back to the burned out Galifrey

YAY, fith review!
I like this...I wanna learn too!
Would be kinda cool if they went back to the burned out Galifrey
5/27/2008 c1
7Gamine Madcap
Just so long as you don't throw them into bed together. I'm kinda interested to see where this goes. Keep up the great work!

Just so long as you don't throw them into bed together. I'm kinda interested to see where this goes. Keep up the great work!
5/25/2008 c1 dreamer24-7
I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more. Please update soon.
I enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to reading more. Please update soon.
5/24/2008 c1 ALLy
YEAH TEN/MARTHA FOREVER.
Anyways, I like this :) You're a really good writer
YEAH TEN/MARTHA FOREVER.
Anyways, I like this :) You're a really good writer