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for Lacy Underwear – plan No 156

7/28/2008 c1 31Kipcha
Hehe, that was hilarious! :)
7/10/2008 c1 Lycrea
LOL! Anna and Nonoko are dead once Mikan sees them.
7/10/2008 c1 9X-J0UR0-X
"...mistakes, if there are i don't mind you..."
6/11/2008 c1 26illutia mist
Lol!XD

That's funny! Natsume really is a pervert ne?:)

Keep up the good job!^^

~illutia mist XD
6/11/2008 c1 10cerespallas
It's actually quite good, although it will be better if you make Natsume's POV a bit later, thinking about what had happened and how he really felt seeing her in that underwear.

But overall, good job!

:)

Cee
6/7/2008 c1 ILUVGA
OMG!tht was so freakin funny gud work! i almost cried becus i cldn't stop laughing which made everyone in mi living room look at me kinda wierd(ha ha...yeah not good)but whatever i don't care becus it was funny!realy mkan is so baka to acualy think natsume was goin 2 faint but thts mkan 4 u.any ways this kinda inspierd me 2 make mi own GA fanfic thnks 4the laugh.
6/1/2008 c1 9kaara-chan
hehe... nyc.. hehe... i only wished to added more sweety moment after that.. haha.. demo... its okay!

^_^
5/25/2008 c1 angelakawaii
i actually like the idea..update soon
5/24/2008 c1 kristinemelody
I love it!

It's so cute!

Well... I find it cute!

Why not make a sequel?

- KMAC
5/24/2008 c1 smile
i love it! :))
5/24/2008 c1 1yue679
Don't be too hard on your self. I LOVED IT!
5/24/2008 c1 MeIsWatIam
lol! i feel so bad for nonoko and anna :(! i hope they dont die after they face the wrath of MIKAN! lol XD hehe nice storry ! so unique and hilarious XDD
5/24/2008 c1 xXxSasukefangirlxXx
Haha that was great!

It was a funny one-shot which made me smile so well done!

xx
5/24/2008 c1 aliceacademy8
LMAO that was Hilarious XDD

i loved it! and they were all pretty much in original character i think. you should write some more!
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