
3/28/2013 c6 Esther
I can imagine natsume with puppy eyes and it looks hilarious. he had a doogy tail wagging on his moonface(butt).
I can imagine natsume with puppy eyes and it looks hilarious. he had a doogy tail wagging on his moonface(butt).
7/30/2012 c4 Danilies
hahahahahahah i wish i could see this in real life it be so funny hahahahaha :D
hahahahahahah i wish i could see this in real life it be so funny hahahahaha :D
8/10/2011 c11 Your Fan
I just love this story so much. It has a very heart-warming and cute plot that just makes you want more of it. I'll be reading this over and over again until I can say the fanfiction without a script. I also love how you ended with "and what they did would change the rating of this story." That just made me laugh more. By now, I'm probably annoying you with this long review, but who wouldn't if your story is amazing. :)
-Donna
I just love this story so much. It has a very heart-warming and cute plot that just makes you want more of it. I'll be reading this over and over again until I can say the fanfiction without a script. I also love how you ended with "and what they did would change the rating of this story." That just made me laugh more. By now, I'm probably annoying you with this long review, but who wouldn't if your story is amazing. :)
-Donna
8/10/2011 c6 Your Fan
This is just...hilarious! LOL I couldn't help but laugh at their OOCness but either way its still awesome. My favorite line of this chapter has got to be: "Seeing as Mikan is pregnant...she must be pissed off...She will be an excellent addition to our team. Merciless...big...and will kill anyone who makes fun of her weight."
This is just...hilarious! LOL I couldn't help but laugh at their OOCness but either way its still awesome. My favorite line of this chapter has got to be: "Seeing as Mikan is pregnant...she must be pissed off...She will be an excellent addition to our team. Merciless...big...and will kill anyone who makes fun of her weight."
1/4/2011 c11 H0ney 06
..your really a nice author..nothing is impossible foryou i thinkk..hhehehhe
actually i bit like your story...
and i expected more lot of twist in the ending...its ok.. i still like it..well all i need to say is..thank you..
..your really a nice author..nothing is impossible foryou i thinkk..hhehehhe
actually i bit like your story...
and i expected more lot of twist in the ending...its ok.. i still like it..well all i need to say is..thank you..
4/28/2009 c11
1dickensjj
nice, it made me laugh :p and how I wish persona was actually like that. LOL

nice, it made me laugh :p and how I wish persona was actually like that. LOL
4/10/2009 c11
2XxAoiHoshixX
lol ..
cool ending .. but .. what happened to the others ? or i must have missed the going back to their own personalities part ? . lol
awesome fic ..

lol ..
cool ending .. but .. what happened to the others ? or i must have missed the going back to their own personalities part ? . lol
awesome fic ..
4/10/2009 c9 XxAoiHoshixX
LOL !
i totally laughed ut loud with the beeping thing !
and tsubasa's shocked expression .. "OH MY GOD !"
i can totally picture him ..
LOL !
i totally laughed ut loud with the beeping thing !
and tsubasa's shocked expression .. "OH MY GOD !"
i can totally picture him ..
2/28/2009 c2 GinandTea
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! i aughed like crazy! ha ha ha ha! i cannot imagine natsume saying kyaa! hwha ha ha ha ha!*rolls on the floor laughing like a maniac*!
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! i aughed like crazy! ha ha ha ha! i cannot imagine natsume saying kyaa! hwha ha ha ha ha!*rolls on the floor laughing like a maniac*!
11/12/2008 c11 Phiineas
kind of nice but you should make a sequel with lemon. ehehehhehe. I really am a pervert.
kind of nice but you should make a sequel with lemon. ehehehhehe. I really am a pervert.
11/11/2008 c11 natsumemikan
hahaha this was a funny but good story
keep up the good work
hahaha this was a funny but good story
keep up the good work