
11/14/2013 c1 Wow
that was amazingly written! Very well done!
that was amazingly written! Very well done!
2/26/2010 c1
10MountFury
Beautiful. I love this story! It give fleshed-out characters even more personallity, makes me really feel Alyx's pain at loosing her father! You are a very good writer, I'll have to read more of your stories!

Beautiful. I love this story! It give fleshed-out characters even more personallity, makes me really feel Alyx's pain at loosing her father! You are a very good writer, I'll have to read more of your stories!
12/3/2008 c1
4zombiedog001
I'm a shameless Gordon/Alyx fan! And this story is perfect for them. I really enjoyed this and I hope to see more in the future!

I'm a shameless Gordon/Alyx fan! And this story is perfect for them. I really enjoyed this and I hope to see more in the future!
6/19/2008 c1 Fishy Crackers
This was great, even with Gordon actually speaking you made it seem all natural. One of the best, though very short.
This was great, even with Gordon actually speaking you made it seem all natural. One of the best, though very short.
5/25/2008 c1
20Kiefer I
Yay! Another half life fic from you! I haven't seen one of these in a while. :) Glad your back.
Stunning. Absolutely Stunning. I really loved this. Please, PLEASE do more. :D

Yay! Another half life fic from you! I haven't seen one of these in a while. :) Glad your back.
Stunning. Absolutely Stunning. I really loved this. Please, PLEASE do more. :D
5/25/2008 c1
14Noun of Nouns
Nice story, Its always nie to see another good ALx/Gordon fic. The only thing I thought needed imporvemet would be the fact that a few pronouns were mixed up. But other than thatit was great. Keep it goin'.

Nice story, Its always nie to see another good ALx/Gordon fic. The only thing I thought needed imporvemet would be the fact that a few pronouns were mixed up. But other than thatit was great. Keep it goin'.