
4/13/2014 c1
8Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom
You captured the essence of these two characters perfectly, thank you for doing that, not every fan fiction writer can.

You captured the essence of these two characters perfectly, thank you for doing that, not every fan fiction writer can.
9/28/2008 c1 loved
I think that was brilliant! This never really entered my mind, that Harry or any of the others would still feel like they were in the midst of the war. Because it does happen. I just never figured it would apply. And the way you wrote it, very simple but still moving. This was a good read.
I think that was brilliant! This never really entered my mind, that Harry or any of the others would still feel like they were in the midst of the war. Because it does happen. I just never figured it would apply. And the way you wrote it, very simple but still moving. This was a good read.
6/22/2008 c1
20Dodger Gilmore
Aw, this is just so adorable. I love this little snippet of their life together and how Harry still has his mental scars of not wanting to leave an argument unfinished. Great job!

Aw, this is just so adorable. I love this little snippet of their life together and how Harry still has his mental scars of not wanting to leave an argument unfinished. Great job!
6/9/2008 c1 Emma
cute
did you, by chance, go to see narnia before you wrote this
edgar and susan, I mean, honestly
cute
did you, by chance, go to see narnia before you wrote this
edgar and susan, I mean, honestly
6/3/2008 c1
9Gryffindor777
Oh, that was sweet. Good story. I like how Ginny understands Harry so well... good stuff.

Oh, that was sweet. Good story. I like how Ginny understands Harry so well... good stuff.
5/31/2008 c1
2harrysgurrl4eva
would you consider making this a proper full lenghth story? maybe something could happen the next morning ?

would you consider making this a proper full lenghth story? maybe something could happen the next morning ?
5/26/2008 c1 Name
I think this was very sweet! You definitely got the characters personalities right! Good job!
I think this was very sweet! You definitely got the characters personalities right! Good job!