
5/10/2009 c2
15minahoru
Wow this is hilarious! hahahaha.
Thanks for creating a story like this!
^_= chuu!
=minahoru=04

Wow this is hilarious! hahahaha.
Thanks for creating a story like this!
^_= chuu!
=minahoru=04
5/31/2008 c1
2Seravee
Finally, I can write my review now... hehehe! Way the go, cousin! Gr! that flamer! Whoever that person is, I'm going to kick his/her ass! Ignore him/her. Oh well, at least because of that flamer, you're encourage now, right? People who get flamed at should be encourage like my own experience hehehehe... by the way, how's your swimming? Okay, bye bye, Cousin, gotta go now! Me gotta do something now! bye!
~Alyssa (FC)

Finally, I can write my review now... hehehe! Way the go, cousin! Gr! that flamer! Whoever that person is, I'm going to kick his/her ass! Ignore him/her. Oh well, at least because of that flamer, you're encourage now, right? People who get flamed at should be encourage like my own experience hehehehe... by the way, how's your swimming? Okay, bye bye, Cousin, gotta go now! Me gotta do something now! bye!
~Alyssa (FC)
5/29/2008 c1
16Topaznik-Citrine
eh, don't listen to 'flamerz' or whatever, people like him or her are just cowards who could'nt become writers themselves because they would rather have their head shoved so far up their asses, they can't hear anyone else.
so, keep working at it ^-^
~Yasu

eh, don't listen to 'flamerz' or whatever, people like him or her are just cowards who could'nt become writers themselves because they would rather have their head shoved so far up their asses, they can't hear anyone else.
so, keep working at it ^-^
~Yasu
5/27/2008 c1 whtevr55
I did not get that...
I did not get that...
5/27/2008 c1 Flamerzz
Boring. This is one of the typical fanfics I have read in my fuck1ng life. You also have lots of grammar mistakes and I hate the way you write it. And the conscience thingy makes it the worst!
I bet that you will be the worst author in the year 2008. Stop writing, you crappy writer! And put all your fanfics in that filthy garbage can of yours. I hope you had put in your puny brain my nice advice.
That's all!
~Flamerzz DX
Boring. This is one of the typical fanfics I have read in my fuck1ng life. You also have lots of grammar mistakes and I hate the way you write it. And the conscience thingy makes it the worst!
I bet that you will be the worst author in the year 2008. Stop writing, you crappy writer! And put all your fanfics in that filthy garbage can of yours. I hope you had put in your puny brain my nice advice.
That's all!
~Flamerzz DX
5/26/2008 c1
6Shireen Tay
hahaha,..so cutest^o^
It was nice one-shot GA
Hope you make more one-shot GA^o^

hahaha,..so cutest^o^
It was nice one-shot GA
Hope you make more one-shot GA^o^
5/26/2008 c1
12Elv
This story is just the typical GA one-shot we read everyday, only the last part though- the panty thing lolz. It was funny at last. But the conscience thing really irks me, for a reason =( sorry to say that. There's a couple of 'gender-mistakes' here.
I don’t love that annoying brat and he’s Ruka’s now!
( I think the he's should be she's)
another one,
Somewhat, I think Mikan isn’t the girl for her
( the her should be his )
I was confused at first when I read the sentence at a glance. Lolz. Sorry if you're offended .

This story is just the typical GA one-shot we read everyday, only the last part though- the panty thing lolz. It was funny at last. But the conscience thing really irks me, for a reason =( sorry to say that. There's a couple of 'gender-mistakes' here.
I don’t love that annoying brat and he’s Ruka’s now!
( I think the he's should be she's)
another one,
Somewhat, I think Mikan isn’t the girl for her
( the her should be his )
I was confused at first when I read the sentence at a glance. Lolz. Sorry if you're offended .