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8/27/2013 c1 2JapaneseAnimeChic
Awwww! So cute!
1/18/2013 c1 Eren Ackerman wife of levi
so cute
8/2/2012 c1 AnimeLuver
It wasn't like Len at all, but I was mad at the ending, too. I wish something sort of like this would have happened. :)
6/6/2012 c1 aisacchan
it was nice
2/7/2012 c1 teddyBearcookies
9/9/2010 c1 Vampire Princess Yuki
Oh my...gawd! OoOoOo...ME LIKEY WHAT i SEE...
5/5/2009 c1 9Cryptic Parchment
hehe I agree that is definitely what should have happened! go kaho x len!
4/21/2009 c1 24NeKo Meow
OH! SUGOI i love it, I have my own version of episode 25 I got it from your story... just wait! thanks
8/7/2008 c1 didn'tfeellikeloginginchick
The idea was really good, but, lol, I agree with you on your last comment, lol. maybe you should rewrite it. And one shots don't have to be short. ^ ^

Which ever you do, have fun writing the fic's ^ ^
7/18/2008 c1 1Evil RULZ
i think this is how episode 24 should have happend as well and im sure that i read somewhere that in the manga len and kahoko do end up together :) i love your version of episode 24 :)
6/29/2008 c1 6CaLee
I have not watched all the anime, as I try to read the manga as they come out first so I don't know what'll happen:) But I think that since the anime is done and they manga is still goeing, even in Japan, there might be hope that she ends up SOMEone, even if it's not Len. At this point, I like all the guys, well...not Azuma...jerk. So I really would be happy if she ended up with anyone else:)

Nice story:)
6/17/2008 c1 Mary
hahahahaha that was so cute! but him lying on top of her...a little too dramatic wouldn't u say..hehe
6/6/2008 c1 13Kakasol728

i totally agree...

hwa!if that happened i would be satisfied already!

it would've been real nice if you added an epilogue when they talked about why Len's performance was so much better!


love your story!

6/3/2008 c1 kEiicHikAwAii
. .that was a nice one shot but isn'y it vulgar to kiss in a place that is public? i mean, they kissed at the beach right? but it was ok for me coz they're my fave couple..sugoi!. .nee, can you make a shimizuXfuuyumi story?. .it's ok if you don't want to..onegaishimasu. .add me if you have friendster. .. .
6/3/2008 c1 clouds lunn
Thank you for the nice one shot fan fiction. It wasn't at all corny. I liked reading it. Good luck in everything else.

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