for The Ransom of Red Visor5/26/2009 c1 IlanaXavier
I can't tell you how many times I laughed out loud on this one. Great job! Keep it coming!
I can't tell you how many times I laughed out loud on this one. Great job! Keep it coming!
6/3/2008 c1 Bethany Alfonsi
This story is hilarious! I thought it was so good that I printed it out so I can read it whenever I want! "Scott in a speedo" ha ha Well, that wouldn't be so bad. . .
I have no criticism to give. I love it!
This story is hilarious! I thought it was so good that I printed it out so I can read it whenever I want! "Scott in a speedo" ha ha Well, that wouldn't be so bad. . .
I have no criticism to give. I love it!
5/30/2008 c1 Jottma
This really was great little story. All the characters came off as lovable, especially Hank and Bobby. Thank you so much for sharing this story with the internet public. Compliments for crafting such a funny and charming tale. Please do write more if you feel like it.
This really was great little story. All the characters came off as lovable, especially Hank and Bobby. Thank you so much for sharing this story with the internet public. Compliments for crafting such a funny and charming tale. Please do write more if you feel like it.
5/30/2008 c1 Acadian Angel
Well done. O. Henry would be proud!
Well done. O. Henry would be proud!
5/30/2008 c1 Johnny
I AM NINJA, YOU ARE NINJA! BOBBY DRAKE, GENIUS MUTANT NINJA!
THIS WAS AWESOME IN ALL OF IT'S OVEREXAGGERATED FUNNIES :)
I AM NINJA, YOU ARE NINJA! BOBBY DRAKE, GENIUS MUTANT NINJA!
THIS WAS AWESOME IN ALL OF IT'S OVEREXAGGERATED FUNNIES :)
5/29/2008 c1 Brazos
ADOREABLE
ADOREABLE
5/28/2008 c1 ciami
I loved this one-shot! It was so hilarious!
I loved this one-shot! It was so hilarious!