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9/27/2017 c1 Kairi Hamada
Wow that was a pretty awesome story! I played MFoMT on my phone and had a baby with Gray. This is how I imagined it would be cause a snowstorm happened a week before my Claire got pregnant! XD
1/27/2011 c1 CliffAnnFC
woot, that was hot. i love this pairing
12/17/2010 c1 8StellaAllets
oh my i love it. Gray sounds so sexy xD
4/3/2010 c1 1Endy1818
Gray you have a dirty mind 8D muaha! This was a fun, sexy idea ;] and you wrote it well! Keep it up! 3
5/11/2009 c1 67high improbability
o.0 That was...lemony. My face is going to be red for weeks now. XD

Still, you wrote it well! Great job!
12/15/2008 c1 Ginger
Hey! I bet you know who this is! =D LOL

Anyways, nice story! I loved how you made it hilarious at the same time it was romantic unlike other stories that I have read so far. Most first time lemon authors just dig into the lusty sex scenes without any depth and leave the ending hanging without a conclusion to the plot. Your ending was just brilliant! Kudos to you!
12/8/2008 c1 91Mariagoner
M... this was so sexy and Claire and Gray had *fantastic* chemistry with each other. Great job with this!
8/8/2008 c1 5Commander Allie
I really, really liked it. I've never tried writing a sex story because I haven't had enough experience to write one. I love it though. If you made another one, I would read it for sure. : D [Sorry if I sound like a perverted teen. Lol. I like stories like this because they relax me and are very cute.]
7/7/2008 c1 Basiliskos
I believe Claire had Brown hair, and the same color eyes (not sure bout eyes)
6/28/2008 c1 1SunshineGirlx3
Wow, great lemon! There aren't a lot of good ones around here, but wow yours was awesome. It was also kind of humorous, I was laughing at Claire almost the whole time. But yeah that was good. Very...hot. Lol XD But great job, I love all your stories. :)
6/23/2008 c1 yunakitty
That was awesome! Excellent work.
6/15/2008 c1 12twilight guardian
And here I thought fanfiction banned lemons and adult fanfics years ago. I guess you can't weed them all out... Not that I'm complaining that I found a lemon, I was just shocked. You better hope a n00b kid doesn't come along and reads this lol. It happened to me once when I first came on. Didn't know what the rating meant, didn't know what a lemon meant (actually I was copying someone elses Author's notes when they stated that it was their first lemon, and I wrote it on my story too XD) and read it. My poor 12 year old mind lol. I was scarred but I can't help but laugh about it now that I'm 18. Yeah... I wasn't very observant as it had taken me months to find the 'register' button and then the 'documents' button so you can see how I must have been back then lol
6/15/2008 c1 13Kiminochi
Wow! That's good! A little. . . I mean, A LOT lemony, but this was great. There was some humor to it too. I was kinda laughing and I was kinda into it. Pretty good! I'm just kinda confused how you could write a good story like this! Anyway, please make more! Love Ya! ;D

-Kiminochi
6/15/2008 c1 whitefrosty
my goodness I also never knew you'd write such graphic smut.. good job, man.. really... well written.. O_O (but i'm in shock too)

AND IT'S GAR x MC simon... if you can write such hot het smut, i'm expecting something even hotter with the simons~!
6/15/2008 c1 Snowyapplez
woaho...never knew you could write somthing as graphic (hot graphic) as this D: ! i made an account just to review TIS LOOL amazing..NOW GO DO MC X GAR! :D
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