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8/27/2013 c2 Guest
can you make it longer and stop butting in half way through it is not good and I like the story manly because sakura is not a fan of sasuke and naruto is going to find out how is perantes are
9/17/2009 c1 1Dragonjek

Sasuke/His Right Hand"

1/19/2009 c2 super12
This sounds good so far.

Cant wait for more!
1/3/2009 c2 28kazikamikaze24
The story is still sketchy. It seems like you're not taking the time to add detail to clothing, to plot, or showing a real difference in plot. Yes Sakura and Naruto are relatives, but they're still sharing a bond to Sasuke. A story relies on information for the people/reader to believe in it. You never said how Naruto met with Kyuubi, or how Naruto knows as much as he does. The story is still good, and can become a great tale, but serious work must be done not just in the story, but the emotional attachment you have for it as well.

10/30/2008 c2 7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. Both Temari & Fem. Haku should be with Naruto.
8/3/2008 c2 1Black Volcarona
6/19/2008 c2 1Akira Stridder
6/2/2008 c2 noah009
can;t wait for more.
5/29/2008 c2 1Thyrokio2
Nicely done, cant wait to see next chapters.
5/28/2008 c2 4spriterx
Cool story:)
5/28/2008 c2 2Phnxfyr1
can't wait for more
5/28/2008 c1 Darksnider05
^_^ Blood you killed someone in the your first chapter yay and Harunos no less though they were child abusers so.. thats like triple points.

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