
2/11/2011 c4 Kara Thrace
Oh no, has this fic been abandoned?i know it's been a few years, but I hope you decide to finish it! I'm loving the characters and very intrigued by the plot. More please :)
Oh no, has this fic been abandoned?i know it's been a few years, but I hope you decide to finish it! I'm loving the characters and very intrigued by the plot. More please :)
2/8/2011 c4
9Sidthe
It may just be me but I have the feeling especially from the very end that the only reason Douglas is such a jerk to Cathleen is because of the grandmother...IDK for sure but whatevs! Really great story you got here to so far even if I'm not the biggest fan of her father!

It may just be me but I have the feeling especially from the very end that the only reason Douglas is such a jerk to Cathleen is because of the grandmother...IDK for sure but whatevs! Really great story you got here to so far even if I'm not the biggest fan of her father!
9/30/2008 c4
24Owl Emporium
To tell you the truth...I think her dad is a...very rude word. And her family. But...eh, anyways, I loved this! I also don't like her much; she's very steriotipical (and yes, I know it isn;t her fault)...but I love this story! :D Great job. (:

To tell you the truth...I think her dad is a...very rude word. And her family. But...eh, anyways, I loved this! I also don't like her much; she's very steriotipical (and yes, I know it isn;t her fault)...but I love this story! :D Great job. (:
8/7/2008 c4 kataz
awesome job! I love the story, I love the way you've gotten into the characters heads, you really seem to know what Indiana and Mutt would be like! Keep writing and update soon!
awesome job! I love the story, I love the way you've gotten into the characters heads, you really seem to know what Indiana and Mutt would be like! Keep writing and update soon!
8/6/2008 c4 MoonlitSorrows
Please please please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter, is there any more juicy scenes with MUTT?
Please please please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter, is there any more juicy scenes with MUTT?
7/16/2008 c4
9The Witchy Writer
Oh~ I absolutely love this story; I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!

Oh~ I absolutely love this story; I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
7/11/2008 c4
13Luminous-Bluebell
I think that you have a really good story going on here, and the way you presented Douglas fit well with the indirect characterization. It was well written, and I hope to see more chapters out... not soon, because I'm aware of how difficult it is to write sometimes, but nevertheless, it would be awesome.

I think that you have a really good story going on here, and the way you presented Douglas fit well with the indirect characterization. It was well written, and I hope to see more chapters out... not soon, because I'm aware of how difficult it is to write sometimes, but nevertheless, it would be awesome.
7/9/2008 c4
8Acelinn
Great story, I'm really enjoying it so far. Please, an update? You can't leave us hanging like this!
Acelinn.

Great story, I'm really enjoying it so far. Please, an update? You can't leave us hanging like this!
Acelinn.
6/30/2008 c4 tori
This is the best post kotcs i have read yet I hope you update it really soon!
This is the best post kotcs i have read yet I hope you update it really soon!
6/13/2008 c4
18a proud geekfreak
lol, go Cathleen! it was interesting to see her father's character, very good.

lol, go Cathleen! it was interesting to see her father's character, very good.
6/12/2008 c4 Ceville
Cat's dad is a jerk isn't he?
Excuse my language by the way, I just find myself hating him as I read this chapter.
Ehehe.
Hating in a good way though.
If that's possible...
Not really...
Ehehehehe...
-runs away-
Cat's dad is a jerk isn't he?
Excuse my language by the way, I just find myself hating him as I read this chapter.
Ehehe.
Hating in a good way though.
If that's possible...
Not really...
Ehehehehe...
-runs away-