for What Happens After A Meeting9/16/2016 c1 Kurenai24
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Do not put an author's note in the middle of the story, it takes your readers out of the story, it's amateurish, and most anime fanfiction writers do it, b/c they're young and haven't yet taken all of their english/grammar classes to know what not to do in any writing medium.
Also there is never a reason to capslock words/sentences in fic, that's what the exclamation points are there for, it just makes the fic look childish.
I didn't feel like signing in.
Anyway...
Do not put an author's note in the middle of the story, it takes your readers out of the story, it's amateurish, and most anime fanfiction writers do it, b/c they're young and haven't yet taken all of their english/grammar classes to know what not to do in any writing medium.
Also there is never a reason to capslock words/sentences in fic, that's what the exclamation points are there for, it just makes the fic look childish.
8/4/2016 c13 TigrezzTail
Heh, I wonder if Danzo is prepared to find shukaku not only at his door, but already inside?
Heh, I wonder if Danzo is prepared to find shukaku not only at his door, but already inside?
7/30/2016 c13 thor94
hope you plan gaara release naruto and the babies, and let our blonde slowly torturing danzo and anyone involved to this in painful way before killing them.
hope you plan gaara release naruto and the babies, and let our blonde slowly torturing danzo and anyone involved to this in painful way before killing them.
7/21/2015 c12 TigrezzTail
Yeah, naruto just seems to attract trouble, huh? Guess he should have let Tsunade assign those ANBu after all. Or maybe that would have just led to unnecessary deaths.
Yeah, naruto just seems to attract trouble, huh? Guess he should have let Tsunade assign those ANBu after all. Or maybe that would have just led to unnecessary deaths.
7/21/2015 c12 CEROLINES
I freaking love it!:D Everything about it makes me want be happy!Though the sad parts are luck on the next chapter.:3
I freaking love it!:D Everything about it makes me want be happy!Though the sad parts are luck on the next chapter.:3
3/8/2015 c11 TigrezzTail
Yeah I agree with Naruto. That level of decoration is not only excessive, but scary!
Yeah I agree with Naruto. That level of decoration is not only excessive, but scary!
8/21/2014 c10 TigrezzTail
Awesome, I suppose it was foolish to think that they wouldn't have been interested in exploring Naruto's new bits earlier rather than later. And that was a surprising revelation regarding their demons.
Awesome, I suppose it was foolish to think that they wouldn't have been interested in exploring Naruto's new bits earlier rather than later. And that was a surprising revelation regarding their demons.
8/21/2014 c1 Guest
Fucking faggot ass nigger.
Fucking faggot ass nigger.
3/12/2013 c8 
22DarcAngel696
Please update. I'm enjoying this story and i hate it when a good story goes dead.
22DarcAngel696Please update. I'm enjoying this story and i hate it when a good story goes dead.
2/25/2013 c8 Guest
I Love This Story Alot! I Just Started Reading It and I Completely Fell In Love With It(And Kurohi xD). I Really Hope You'll Update Soon.
I Love This Story Alot! I Just Started Reading It and I Completely Fell In Love With It(And Kurohi xD). I Really Hope You'll Update Soon.