
7/26/2010 c6 TigrezzTail
well, even if it's been a year, as long as you didn't completely forget, I can forgive you! And I never really bother authors about grammar & such unless it's so bad that I can't begin to understand what they are trying to say. I can't wait to find out where you are taking this story. But that said, whatever you do, don't neglect your schoolwork. College is HELL if you fall behind. I could never understand how fewer classes meant double the amount of work I had to do outside of class, when compared to high school... shrug
well, even if it's been a year, as long as you didn't completely forget, I can forgive you! And I never really bother authors about grammar & such unless it's so bad that I can't begin to understand what they are trying to say. I can't wait to find out where you are taking this story. But that said, whatever you do, don't neglect your schoolwork. College is HELL if you fall behind. I could never understand how fewer classes meant double the amount of work I had to do outside of class, when compared to high school... shrug
7/25/2010 c5
2uous
Before I get into my review, I must say that, yes, you do have some spelling and grammatical errors, however, before you put me in the flamer catagory with those idiots, I LOVE THIS STORY! I love the plot, and the people who said they couldn't understand it obviously don't have the brain power to make an intuitive leap. I agree with your statement about pink being a disgusting color as well. Making Gaara into a more emtional character was a wonderful stroke from a masterful pen. I see that you haven't updated this story in a while, and I hope it's not because of bad reviews. If it is, you must grin and bear it,because you have a good thing going here, and I really want to "see" naruto's kits. Please finish this story, I'm waiting impatiently.

Before I get into my review, I must say that, yes, you do have some spelling and grammatical errors, however, before you put me in the flamer catagory with those idiots, I LOVE THIS STORY! I love the plot, and the people who said they couldn't understand it obviously don't have the brain power to make an intuitive leap. I agree with your statement about pink being a disgusting color as well. Making Gaara into a more emtional character was a wonderful stroke from a masterful pen. I see that you haven't updated this story in a while, and I hope it's not because of bad reviews. If it is, you must grin and bear it,because you have a good thing going here, and I really want to "see" naruto's kits. Please finish this story, I'm waiting impatiently.
3/7/2010 c5 TigrezzTail
I really am enjoying the story. Even with all the smexy goodness you are adding alot of the romance & love, which is just as fulfilling story-wise, in my opinion
I really am enjoying the story. Even with all the smexy goodness you are adding alot of the romance & love, which is just as fulfilling story-wise, in my opinion
3/6/2010 c5 maria
(7*7*7angeloflove) KYA! THIS STORY ROCKS! *YAOI FANGIRL SQUEEL* PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I'M SO ADDING THIS STORY TO MY FAVS WHEN I LOGIN LATER! XD
(7*7*7angeloflove) KYA! THIS STORY ROCKS! *YAOI FANGIRL SQUEEL* PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I'M SO ADDING THIS STORY TO MY FAVS WHEN I LOGIN LATER! XD
8/14/2009 c5 darknessthorn
NOSEBLEED! that is awesome dude keep it coming!
NOSEBLEED! that is awesome dude keep it coming!
8/13/2009 c5
6KakashiXIrukaLover
aw thanks boo...you keep writing cuz we love your stories! Hope everything is ok and can't wait for the next update!

aw thanks boo...you keep writing cuz we love your stories! Hope everything is ok and can't wait for the next update!
11/28/2008 c4 HyperOffPocky
OMG.
Please Continue. Please. That was probably one of the most hoittest sex scenes ive read...
OMG.
Please Continue. Please. That was probably one of the most hoittest sex scenes ive read...
9/25/2008 c2
1Nelem
this is um... a unique plot line...
Well, there's so many grammar mistakes that I can't even finish it

this is um... a unique plot line...
Well, there's so many grammar mistakes that I can't even finish it
9/22/2008 c4
6KakashiXIrukaLover
LOVED IT! ZOMG...update soon please please please...i'll give you cookies, cake, whatever you want.

LOVED IT! ZOMG...update soon please please please...i'll give you cookies, cake, whatever you want.
9/16/2008 c3 KakashiXIrukaLover
squeal...oh please update..this is such a good story and i want to find out what happens.
squeal...oh please update..this is such a good story and i want to find out what happens.