
2/19/2013 c2 Angelica
Please continue this fanfic!
Please continue this fanfic!
6/22/2009 c2
12Paladin Graith
Okay, I just completed what you have writen so far for this story and I must say that I'm disappointed. Not in the story quality, but in how FUCKING LONG IT'S TAKING YOU TO UPDATE EVEN ONE MORE SHORT CHAPTER!

Okay, I just completed what you have writen so far for this story and I must say that I'm disappointed. Not in the story quality, but in how FUCKING LONG IT'S TAKING YOU TO UPDATE EVEN ONE MORE SHORT CHAPTER!
12/4/2008 c2
8Namikaze Minato
If you want a good eng-jap & jap-eng translater go to w (dot) freedict (dot) com/onldict/jap (dot) html

If you want a good eng-jap & jap-eng translater go to w (dot) freedict (dot) com/onldict/jap (dot) html
7/31/2008 c2 Sage of Oblivion
It was rather enjoyeble I have read some fics simulare to this one but it has a bit more of some things giving it an edge I can only hope it will continue.
It was rather enjoyeble I have read some fics simulare to this one but it has a bit more of some things giving it an edge I can only hope it will continue.
7/13/2008 c2
17MRBee
Kick their ASS Naruto!
and also... now that makes sense. I was wondering why Naruto was the same age as Neji. Heh he's actually older then all of them, Nice! also tyte that you changed up the fox appearances, instead of the typical red/orange w/ white tips, or gold w/ white tips (talking bout ears and tails).
ok overall I really like the story. Im just curious to see if anyone knows he's a jinchuuriki. Cuz since he lived the Sarutobi, the villagers didn't have a chance to accept him as a demon right?
my ONLY/BIGGEST PROBLEM with this story is this...
You NEED TO UPDATE SOON! heh,
ps. expect my draft to be coming soon, atleast before tuesday.

Kick their ASS Naruto!
and also... now that makes sense. I was wondering why Naruto was the same age as Neji. Heh he's actually older then all of them, Nice! also tyte that you changed up the fox appearances, instead of the typical red/orange w/ white tips, or gold w/ white tips (talking bout ears and tails).
ok overall I really like the story. Im just curious to see if anyone knows he's a jinchuuriki. Cuz since he lived the Sarutobi, the villagers didn't have a chance to accept him as a demon right?
my ONLY/BIGGEST PROBLEM with this story is this...
You NEED TO UPDATE SOON! heh,
ps. expect my draft to be coming soon, atleast before tuesday.
7/13/2008 c1 MRBee
Whussup BETA! just have a question for you. Umm Neji is supposed to be a year older then Naruto right? so why was he born a month before? Also, having a baby delivered to your doorstep (sarutobi's) by a giant toad is priceless.
alrighty on to the next chap.
Whussup BETA! just have a question for you. Umm Neji is supposed to be a year older then Naruto right? so why was he born a month before? Also, having a baby delivered to your doorstep (sarutobi's) by a giant toad is priceless.
alrighty on to the next chap.
6/27/2008 c2
7Dragnos
Hey good stuff so far. Keep it up. Don't worry, I should have a new chapter up by next week.

Hey good stuff so far. Keep it up. Don't worry, I should have a new chapter up by next week.
6/15/2008 c2
2Chewie Cookies
Whoa! Hinata saw Naruto's Kitsune features! How will she react, I wonder?

Whoa! Hinata saw Naruto's Kitsune features! How will she react, I wonder?