for A Blooming Edwardian Summer11/18/2008 c7 
4Lovely Lady Diggory
You're quite a good writer...though i can't quite figure out why'd you'd write a fanfiction and then bash the book. Even if you don't like it...anyway, please update.
4Lovely Lady DiggoryYou're quite a good writer...though i can't quite figure out why'd you'd write a fanfiction and then bash the book. Even if you don't like it...anyway, please update.
9/2/2008 c7 TheRandomPerson
I love the way you write Bella because Meyer made her a wimpy pathetic girl that was ALWAYS stunned by the very thought of Edward and your Bella is fiesty and can see the true Edward's mistakes and how freakish he really is. No offense to the Edward lovers out there.
I love the way you write Bella because Meyer made her a wimpy pathetic girl that was ALWAYS stunned by the very thought of Edward and your Bella is fiesty and can see the true Edward's mistakes and how freakish he really is. No offense to the Edward lovers out there.
8/22/2008 c6 TheRandomPerson
I command you to update as soo as possible!
I command you to update as soo as possible!
8/22/2008 c6 TheRandomPerson
Oh, poor Edward, rejected and forgotten.
Oh, poor Edward, rejected and forgotten.
8/22/2008 c4 TheRandomPerson
No public displays of affection Mr. Masen! Just HOLDING HANDS
was considereda show of love, did you know that?
No public displays of affection Mr. Masen! Just HOLDING HANDS
was considereda show of love, did you know that?
8/22/2008 c3 TheRandomPerson
Do you know what the name "Edward" means?
It means 'rich ward'. It makes sense because
he gaurds Bella with his life and he is rich-
in many versions of the word.
Do you know what the name "Edward" means?
It means 'rich ward'. It makes sense because
he gaurds Bella with his life and he is rich-
in many versions of the word.
8/22/2008 c2 TheRandomPerson
:D Yeah!
:D Yeah!
8/22/2008 c1 TheRandomPerson
You,” Edward said, “Are on crack.”
HA! That was real good.
This was a very well writin piece. You really delved into the Psyche of Edward-along with many other people- very well.
*YOU WON'T CARE ABOUT THE REST SO LEAVE THIS REVIEW. SERIOUSLY.*
I am very sure SOMEONE out there is stalking me. then filming eveything I say to myself and put it on Youtube where everyone ends up copping me on my therioes and such. It is just plain creep.
You,” Edward said, “Are on crack.”
HA! That was real good.
This was a very well writin piece. You really delved into the Psyche of Edward-along with many other people- very well.
*YOU WON'T CARE ABOUT THE REST SO LEAVE THIS REVIEW. SERIOUSLY.*
I am very sure SOMEONE out there is stalking me. then filming eveything I say to myself and put it on Youtube where everyone ends up copping me on my therioes and such. It is just plain creep.
8/21/2008 c6 InspiredDelinquent
your writing is so amazing! i like that bella has fight in her. i loved the edward kissing her part, i know it wasnt your idea but you still wrote it perfectly. doesnt he think? i mean why would "Bella Swan" be there doing his laundry? lol cant wait to see what happens next
update soon!
your writing is so amazing! i like that bella has fight in her. i loved the edward kissing her part, i know it wasnt your idea but you still wrote it perfectly. doesnt he think? i mean why would "Bella Swan" be there doing his laundry? lol cant wait to see what happens next
update soon!
8/21/2008 c6 17Saoirse3473
nice! bella is soo fiery! its great! very different from the bella were used to in the books. youve portrayed her so well that im reading her lines with an italian accent! keep up the amazing work!
17Saoirse3473nice! bella is soo fiery! its great! very different from the bella were used to in the books. youve portrayed her so well that im reading her lines with an italian accent! keep up the amazing work!
8/21/2008 c2 Saoirse3473
i like it. its really good, and your writing is quite nice. small question, if twilight sucks, why are you writing a fanfiction about it? just curious...can't wait to finish reading the rest of the chapters!
i like it. its really good, and your writing is quite nice. small question, if twilight sucks, why are you writing a fanfiction about it? just curious...can't wait to finish reading the rest of the chapters!
8/19/2008 c5 COMMMA OF THOUGHT
Beautiful! I dont know why this dosn't have more reviews!Please contiue!
Beautiful! I dont know why this dosn't have more reviews!Please contiue!
8/19/2008 c4 HistoryintheMaking
I rather like the attention to historical detail. I didn't comment on it before, but the accuracy of each historical reference is greatly appreciated. My name is HistoryintheMaking, and I do love history. Keep em coming, I do love to hear about Edward's experience at a teenaged boy.
I rather like the attention to historical detail. I didn't comment on it before, but the accuracy of each historical reference is greatly appreciated. My name is HistoryintheMaking, and I do love history. Keep em coming, I do love to hear about Edward's experience at a teenaged boy.