for When You Wish Upon A Star5/2/2020 c16 polola
i love this story
i hope the next chapther
i love this story
i hope the next chapther
1/29/2019 c9 Guest
Hi, just wanted to say that I love this story... Claire is like a breeze of fresh air in it... Although the part when Claire wasn't waking up. I just wanted to point out that if her trachea (wind pipe) was crushed, she'd need more than just some mouth to mouth, if it was really that serious, she would have to be intubated. And also that having a problem with trachea doesn't necessarily mean having a problem with larynx/esophagus. So the healing cordial would get into her system anyways, whether it would be through the esophagus and stomach or the mucosa in her mouth. Don't get me wrong. This is just the technical point of view. I love the story and I'm all about these medical plots... I am a health care student myself, so the kind of professional damage is happening every time I'm watching/reading anything connected to health. Good job with the story...
Hi, just wanted to say that I love this story... Claire is like a breeze of fresh air in it... Although the part when Claire wasn't waking up. I just wanted to point out that if her trachea (wind pipe) was crushed, she'd need more than just some mouth to mouth, if it was really that serious, she would have to be intubated. And also that having a problem with trachea doesn't necessarily mean having a problem with larynx/esophagus. So the healing cordial would get into her system anyways, whether it would be through the esophagus and stomach or the mucosa in her mouth. Don't get me wrong. This is just the technical point of view. I love the story and I'm all about these medical plots... I am a health care student myself, so the kind of professional damage is happening every time I'm watching/reading anything connected to health. Good job with the story...
1/31/2015 c13 clare
I love this chapter it almost made me cry. looove this
I love this chapter it almost made me cry. looove this
4/23/2014 c16 guest5
can you please finish the story? it's amazing
can you please finish the story? it's amazing
10/15/2013 c3 Guest
Hhahah that was funny. Nice to see her handle that sword like an actual inexperienced person.
GIVE ME MORE EDMUND!
Hhahah that was funny. Nice to see her handle that sword like an actual inexperienced person.
GIVE ME MORE EDMUND!
22/27/2013 c13 thehungergamer12
How did they not get killed everyone hates them so how can they not see them of at least step on them? I said it before and I'll say it now CHEESY!
How did they not get killed everyone hates them so how can they not see them of at least step on them? I said it before and I'll say it now CHEESY!
2/27/2013 c12 thehungergamer12
HOW DID SHE LEARN HOW TO THROW KNIVES!? OMG HOW DID THAT HAPPEN SHE DIN'T SEE AN ARROW COMING cheeeeessyyyyy
HOW DID SHE LEARN HOW TO THROW KNIVES!? OMG HOW DID THAT HAPPEN SHE DIN'T SEE AN ARROW COMING cheeeeessyyyyy
2/27/2013 c10 thehungergamer12
Um I just had DAYJAVU don't all pevensie love stories start with the couple hating each other? Does anyone notice that but me.
Um I just had DAYJAVU don't all pevensie love stories start with the couple hating each other? Does anyone notice that but me.
2/27/2013 c6 thehungergamer12
-_- not cool about the wizarding stuff it belongs to the queen J.K Rowling
-_- not cool about the wizarding stuff it belongs to the queen J.K Rowling