for The Player7/18/2008 c3 
9The Authoress of Heartbreak
AWESOME! I love how you put detail into his rejection! heh heh, even though I CANNOT EVEN IMAGINE Shadow dating Mina, i think it sounds really cool in this story! GO JET! SHOW SONIC WHO'S BOSS! er, bird...uh, never mind! Great job, and I curse all flamers with my Jewish Gypsy Voodoo magic!
9The Authoress of HeartbreakAWESOME! I love how you put detail into his rejection! heh heh, even though I CANNOT EVEN IMAGINE Shadow dating Mina, i think it sounds really cool in this story! GO JET! SHOW SONIC WHO'S BOSS! er, bird...uh, never mind! Great job, and I curse all flamers with my Jewish Gypsy Voodoo magic!
7/18/2008 c1 GingerbreadHouseofHorrors
Really good so far. Can't wait to read more!
See you in the next chapter.
~Chow
Really good so far. Can't wait to read more!
See you in the next chapter.
~Chow
7/18/2008 c2 ChaosBoundJenna
Cool. I like this story. But you know Tikal is tan right? Anyway, update soon please! =D
Cool. I like this story. But you know Tikal is tan right? Anyway, update soon please! =D
6/16/2008 c2 5Warped Violet Roses
pretty sweet story :D
one thing: tikal isn't red. she's tan/beige. I don't know if you know that or not, i just thought i throw that out there.
other than that, really good
5Warped Violet Rosespretty sweet story :D
one thing: tikal isn't red. she's tan/beige. I don't know if you know that or not, i just thought i throw that out there.
other than that, really good