1/24/2011 c1 foreverlybound
Cute story and I loved all your words. :) Most people do not have such an extended vocabulary. Bravo.
Cute story and I loved all your words. :) Most people do not have such an extended vocabulary. Bravo.
3/25/2009 c1 Nez93
oh this is WONDERFUL! ah i love this story so far, and its only the 1st chapter! wonderful storyline! ah! i absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!
oh this is WONDERFUL! ah i love this story so far, and its only the 1st chapter! wonderful storyline! ah! i absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!
12/2/2008 c1 Liz16
You're story is adorable so far! I really like Edward portrayed as the "starbucks boy"! haha! I also really appreciate that you're keeping everyone true to their characters without making it the same old stuff that we've already read in the books! Please, please, please keep writing!
You're story is adorable so far! I really like Edward portrayed as the "starbucks boy"! haha! I also really appreciate that you're keeping everyone true to their characters without making it the same old stuff that we've already read in the books! Please, please, please keep writing!
8/23/2008 c1 10Myheroicdeed
So cute!
There has to be more than that you can't possibly just leave it hanging out there.
Loved it absolutely completely loved it.
So cute!
There has to be more than that you can't possibly just leave it hanging out there.
Loved it absolutely completely loved it.
8/14/2008 c1 2070
Dude. I am going to start hanging out at Starbucks every single day to wait for my Edward. XD
Cute story. I loved it!
Dude. I am going to start hanging out at Starbucks every single day to wait for my Edward. XD
Cute story. I loved it!
6/13/2008 c1 20Anemies
for some strange human feeling: I loved the name "Starbucks Boy"
I promise you, I did. It's like so sweet or something. well, you shouldn't have out up the last sentence. It was well enough with the 'as we approached the restaurant...blah blah blah. Anyways, yep. I't a atart of something new. Isn't that a song? lol. OK~
It was really cute, not much fluff. It would definitely make a good start for a on-going story. see u
for some strange human feeling: I loved the name "Starbucks Boy"
I promise you, I did. It's like so sweet or something. well, you shouldn't have out up the last sentence. It was well enough with the 'as we approached the restaurant...blah blah blah. Anyways, yep. I't a atart of something new. Isn't that a song? lol. OK~
It was really cute, not much fluff. It would definitely make a good start for a on-going story. see u
6/9/2008 c1 4m y e p i p h a n y
Its so friggin adorable! I love it! Whenever I go to Starbucks, there's always this adorable dude who always gives me extra caramel sauce! Love it.
Its so friggin adorable! I love it! Whenever I go to Starbucks, there's always this adorable dude who always gives me extra caramel sauce! Love it.
6/9/2008 c1 6Shai Butter
Oh my goodness! That was so insanely cute! I absolutely LOVED it! The way everything developed was perfect! Not too fast and not too slow...ugh...I can't even begin to describe how much i love it! Great job! And if you ever find the time to commit to making this a story...i'm all for it...all in all...BEAUTIFUL story!
love,
Ebony!
Oh my goodness! That was so insanely cute! I absolutely LOVED it! The way everything developed was perfect! Not too fast and not too slow...ugh...I can't even begin to describe how much i love it! Great job! And if you ever find the time to commit to making this a story...i'm all for it...all in all...BEAUTIFUL story!
love,
Ebony!