for Indian Interlude6/22/2008 c7 
70ScruffyLovin
lol. Jack has a new mommy. *snickers* And she's certainly not happy with her wittle boy. XD Poor Jack.
70ScruffyLovinlol. Jack has a new mommy. *snickers* And she's certainly not happy with her wittle boy. XD Poor Jack.
6/22/2008 c7 10PatriciaS
LOL brilliant chapter great picture between the three of them ... love Jack's new mum.
Knowing Jack though he'll find a way around her sometime ... after a few opps that hurt no doubt.
Coloured Sky is a nice link between the two. Since she asked those questions and knows a bit about warrior Sam I'm thinking sister friendship. Though the sleeping with Jack might worry him a bit but on the other hand they both know about body heat and it's healing powers.
10PatriciaSLOL brilliant chapter great picture between the three of them ... love Jack's new mum.
Knowing Jack though he'll find a way around her sometime ... after a few opps that hurt no doubt.
Coloured Sky is a nice link between the two. Since she asked those questions and knows a bit about warrior Sam I'm thinking sister friendship. Though the sleeping with Jack might worry him a bit but on the other hand they both know about body heat and it's healing powers.
6/22/2008 c7 Bucky4
Oh, this one was fun! Little Step and Colored Sky are taking on full personalities.
Oh, and thanks for the S/J hints!
Oh, this one was fun! Little Step and Colored Sky are taking on full personalities.
Oh, and thanks for the S/J hints!
6/22/2008 c7 5smithcrafter
The picture that comes to my mind is Little Step leading Jack along by the ear! Snicker. Cackle!
5smithcrafterThe picture that comes to my mind is Little Step leading Jack along by the ear! Snicker. Cackle!
6/22/2008 c7 Nessie1701
Got to love Little Step's bedside manner... Ole Doc Frasiers' bit needles got nothing on her...
Got to love Little Step's bedside manner... Ole Doc Frasiers' bit needles got nothing on her...
6/22/2008 c7 Jackless
Oh man, she's his mother, that's too funny, but I bet Jack won't think so! Poor man, now she can really pull rank on him.
Oh man, she's his mother, that's too funny, but I bet Jack won't think so! Poor man, now she can really pull rank on him.
6/22/2008 c7 3allaboutcontests
Aw, poor Jack. He just doesn't do well with woman, does he? XD
I'm curious where you're going to go with his relationship with Colored Sky. Keep up the good work.
3allaboutcontestsAw, poor Jack. He just doesn't do well with woman, does he? XD
I'm curious where you're going to go with his relationship with Colored Sky. Keep up the good work.
6/21/2008 c6 Jackless
Oh boy, is Jack going to get it! That poor man just can't catch a break. More please!
Oh boy, is Jack going to get it! That poor man just can't catch a break. More please!
6/21/2008 c6 gibblesgal
Apparently, Jack is out to win the award for being the most stubborn and helpful captive these Indians have ever known. He didn't have to do any of what he did to help during and after the raid, yet he did it anyway, putting his own well-being at risk. The man has a true compassion for those in need regardless of his personal needs.
Your uncanny knack for describing Jack's personal pains and emotional agonies is such that I have to admit to using multiple tissues to enable me to finish this chapter. It was that gut-wrenching to read. I applaud your ability to write such a story.
Wouldn't it be fabulous if Jack could be told that he only had to heal enough to be taken back to the Stargate? That they would see him safely there so he could contact his own people? His spirits would be so high.
Apparently, Jack is out to win the award for being the most stubborn and helpful captive these Indians have ever known. He didn't have to do any of what he did to help during and after the raid, yet he did it anyway, putting his own well-being at risk. The man has a true compassion for those in need regardless of his personal needs.
Your uncanny knack for describing Jack's personal pains and emotional agonies is such that I have to admit to using multiple tissues to enable me to finish this chapter. It was that gut-wrenching to read. I applaud your ability to write such a story.
Wouldn't it be fabulous if Jack could be told that he only had to heal enough to be taken back to the Stargate? That they would see him safely there so he could contact his own people? His spirits would be so high.
6/20/2008 c6 10PatriciaS
Nope Jack's not going to like it when he wakes ... he always was a stubborn ass but a nice one. No doubt the tribe will respect him for his efforts as well.
Great chapter ... liked the way you showed us he won his battle and then showed his grief and his consideration for the others ... he's technically free but can't go far ... yet. Typical Jack.
Looking forward for the next one.
10PatriciaSNope Jack's not going to like it when he wakes ... he always was a stubborn ass but a nice one. No doubt the tribe will respect him for his efforts as well.
Great chapter ... liked the way you showed us he won his battle and then showed his grief and his consideration for the others ... he's technically free but can't go far ... yet. Typical Jack.
Looking forward for the next one.
6/20/2008 c6 Nessie1701
Got to hand it to Little Step...she is almost as good as Frasier, but she did let JAck escape just a little to far... Loved it!
Got to hand it to Little Step...she is almost as good as Frasier, but she did let JAck escape just a little to far... Loved it!
6/20/2008 c6 70ScruffyLovin
Ouch. x_0; Poor Jack. It shows a lot how the villagers respect Jack by freeing him, even if he can't really do anything about that yet. And the imagery with the boots was just wonderful. :)
70ScruffyLovinOuch. x_0; Poor Jack. It shows a lot how the villagers respect Jack by freeing him, even if he can't really do anything about that yet. And the imagery with the boots was just wonderful. :)
6/20/2008 c6 zats
Jack is still the survivor whenever is he...still greives for children everywhere. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Jack is still the survivor whenever is he...still greives for children everywhere. Can't wait to find out what happens next!