for Indian Interlude6/15/2008 c3 
70ScruffyLovin
Jack saved a boy and now he's getting better treatment. Yay. :) Very in-character for him not to just leave the boy and take off when they were on the other side of the river, too. :)
70ScruffyLovinJack saved a boy and now he's getting better treatment. Yay. :) Very in-character for him not to just leave the boy and take off when they were on the other side of the river, too. :)
6/15/2008 c3 zats
Another entertaining chapter. Looking forward to reading more of Jack's indian adventure.
Another entertaining chapter. Looking forward to reading more of Jack's indian adventure.
6/15/2008 c3 10PatriciaS
You could always try threatening it with little arrows or do a war dance... at least that would get rid of your frustrations.
As for the chapter nice one ... Jack kids dogs and whumping what more do we want ... oh yes more please.
10PatriciaSYou could always try threatening it with little arrows or do a war dance... at least that would get rid of your frustrations.
As for the chapter nice one ... Jack kids dogs and whumping what more do we want ... oh yes more please.
6/15/2008 c3 5smithcrafter
Should have known. Trust Jack to mke friends with the kids first. Good chapter.
5smithcrafterShould have known. Trust Jack to mke friends with the kids first. Good chapter.
6/15/2008 c3 11Latergatr
Enjoying the story - a little mistery, a little whump... Keeps me guessing and wanting more!
11LatergatrEnjoying the story - a little mistery, a little whump... Keeps me guessing and wanting more!
6/15/2008 c3 Jackless
That's just so Jack, he would never leave a child in need. I do love the way you write Jack! Keep it coming, am with you all the way.
That's just so Jack, he would never leave a child in need. I do love the way you write Jack! Keep it coming, am with you all the way.
6/14/2008 c2 10PatriciaS
Beautiful chapter,glad Jack's got something on his side for now, though no doubt it's going to comeback and bite him. His reactions are so true and to Little Step as well,sure that dog's going to be in it again somewhere. Love your cross Hammond with Daniel so good. Looking forward to the next chapters.
10PatriciaSBeautiful chapter,glad Jack's got something on his side for now, though no doubt it's going to comeback and bite him. His reactions are so true and to Little Step as well,sure that dog's going to be in it again somewhere. Love your cross Hammond with Daniel so good. Looking forward to the next chapters.
6/14/2008 c2 gibblesgal
This story has been enthralling so far. For once something that happened to him before is keeping him from more pain, for the moment anyway. He just has to behave himself and perform the bidding of Little Step to her liking as he makes plans for his escape that will have to be foolproof. Of course being rescued would be most welcomed, I'm sure.
It was good that General Hammond took control before Daniel ran off half-cocked and got himself and/or others captured or worse as he attempted a rescue while tired and without a plan. It's not as if Hammond didn't send anyone to look for the colonel.
More is most welcomed.
This story has been enthralling so far. For once something that happened to him before is keeping him from more pain, for the moment anyway. He just has to behave himself and perform the bidding of Little Step to her liking as he makes plans for his escape that will have to be foolproof. Of course being rescued would be most welcomed, I'm sure.
It was good that General Hammond took control before Daniel ran off half-cocked and got himself and/or others captured or worse as he attempted a rescue while tired and without a plan. It's not as if Hammond didn't send anyone to look for the colonel.
More is most welcomed.
6/13/2008 c2 zats
Very interesting. Like the indian background. Can't wait to see where your muse that all of us. More soon!
Very interesting. Like the indian background. Can't wait to see where your muse that all of us. More soon!
6/13/2008 c2 5smithcrafter
You have good imagery. I loved the picture of Jack's tongue "bathing" in the water he was given to drink.
5smithcrafterYou have good imagery. I loved the picture of Jack's tongue "bathing" in the water he was given to drink.
6/13/2008 c2 Jackless
Keeping my interest will not be a problem. I love your other works and this is turning out great as well. Keep those chapters coming.
Keeping my interest will not be a problem. I love your other works and this is turning out great as well. Keep those chapters coming.
6/13/2008 c2 Bucky4
This is really wonderful. I was glad to see what was happening back at the SGC, but your descriptions of Jack's situation-and his reactions to them are spot on. I hope this means we'll get daily updates-I love Jack-whump stories.!
This is really wonderful. I was glad to see what was happening back at the SGC, but your descriptions of Jack's situation-and his reactions to them are spot on. I hope this means we'll get daily updates-I love Jack-whump stories.!
6/13/2008 c2 70ScruffyLovin
Ooh, I just love a good Jack whump story. :) Interesting take on capture with the 'Indians' from a different planet. :D Looking forward to more.
70ScruffyLovinOoh, I just love a good Jack whump story. :) Interesting take on capture with the 'Indians' from a different planet. :D Looking forward to more.
6/12/2008 c1 Bucky4
Great start. Lots of detail, the violence and apparent danger of the flashback contrasting with the solicitous care of the present day opening. You have Jack nicely in character. You indicate in the summary that the story is about Jack learning about Native American culture-presumably plains indians from the description.
I hope we get to see the SGC searching for him. And I hope there'll be hints of S/J, but it's not a deal breaker.
Great start. Lots of detail, the violence and apparent danger of the flashback contrasting with the solicitous care of the present day opening. You have Jack nicely in character. You indicate in the summary that the story is about Jack learning about Native American culture-presumably plains indians from the description.
I hope we get to see the SGC searching for him. And I hope there'll be hints of S/J, but it's not a deal breaker.