6/12/2008 c1 10PatriciaS
Good start, poor Jack's certainly in trouble looking ... forward to the next one. Thanks for sharing.

6/12/2008 c1 gibblesgal
Quite a whopper of a first chapter. Poor Jack is sure on the receiving end of someone's ire. It will be interesting to see how he deals with his situation as he waits to see how his team is able to rescue him without getting themselves captured.

I'll be anxiously waiting for updates.

6/11/2008 c1 5smithcrafter
Oh goody, it's about time for another good Jack whump story!