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6/24/2008 c1 NightSkyHunter
Amazingly done! Love it and great job at keeping Jack in character.

Elayna is coming along just fine. Just don't do it up way over the top.
6/13/2008 c1 3Crowned Black Hearts.pub
Very well writen! I like your charector Elayna...very sassy;)

update soon!

6/13/2008 c1 4BleedingRoses92
Great start, keep it up!

6/13/2008 c1 aquakim

i like the story

i can't wait to read more chapters

please upload quickly!


6/12/2008 c1 Straight Edge Queen
Great chapter and I really like it overall! I really hope you update soon...
6/11/2008 c1 3SunSetsFlashOfGreen
I liked your story. I love the fact that this is a different version of how Jack got the Black Pearl. The one thing I thought was weird in the story was the name of the Black Pearl's sister ship. The White Pearl is not that catchy. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
6/11/2008 c1 lady noir
good start but remove the bit about the black pearl, you mention it in dialog and that's really what moves the story along anyway. keep writing!

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