for Crocodile Tears3/28/2010 c1 FFaddict007
Cool, for some reasonI really like this pairing but there's not much of it... :( Found the story to be different and it's complete. Anyway, thanks!
Cool, for some reasonI really like this pairing but there's not much of it... :( Found the story to be different and it's complete. Anyway, thanks!
1/28/2010 c1 
6JEGO
interesting as a one shot probably not as entertaining as a fuller story but still you could prove me wrong
6JEGOinteresting as a one shot probably not as entertaining as a fuller story but still you could prove me wrong
10/10/2009 c1 HonksAholichotmail.com
I've got to say that "Crocodile Tears" is a great title for this piece, Anne seems to simply be going through the motions of remorse.
As a reader I'm sure I'm supposed to find Shego cold and unsympathetic but between the two of the it's Anne that comes off more unsympathetic. She curses her bedmate and laments her need for the physical interaction but in truth Shego is honest in her apathy; honesty that Anne's crocodile tears and faux guilt lacks.
If Anne were honest with herself I think she'd find the sex is all she wants from Shego. I think her focus on Shego's behavior arises from a need to ascribe a flowery emotion to her affair...to justify her 'steppin out' on her husband of X years.
If you plan to continue this story I would love to see Anne face the consequences of her actions, and have someone lay her hypocrasy out for her to see.
I've got to say that "Crocodile Tears" is a great title for this piece, Anne seems to simply be going through the motions of remorse.
As a reader I'm sure I'm supposed to find Shego cold and unsympathetic but between the two of the it's Anne that comes off more unsympathetic. She curses her bedmate and laments her need for the physical interaction but in truth Shego is honest in her apathy; honesty that Anne's crocodile tears and faux guilt lacks.
If Anne were honest with herself I think she'd find the sex is all she wants from Shego. I think her focus on Shego's behavior arises from a need to ascribe a flowery emotion to her affair...to justify her 'steppin out' on her husband of X years.
If you plan to continue this story I would love to see Anne face the consequences of her actions, and have someone lay her hypocrasy out for her to see.
7/10/2009 c1 1PAakaAaS
wow that was interesrin...never read anything like that involving anne n shego...gud jo6
1PAakaAaSwow that was interesrin...never read anything like that involving anne n shego...gud jo6
1/8/2009 c1 14Love Robin
Yep.. leaves minds like mine more questions than it answers. I'm xurious as to how it started. I can only see Ann starting it the first time in trade for something. Like Kim's life. Or to never attack the family at home in retaliation. *Then* getting hooked on the sex.
But that's just moi...
14Love RobinYep.. leaves minds like mine more questions than it answers. I'm xurious as to how it started. I can only see Ann starting it the first time in trade for something. Like Kim's life. Or to never attack the family at home in retaliation. *Then* getting hooked on the sex.
But that's just moi...
8/8/2008 c1 97Blackbird
Wow. Well that was...kind of depressing actually. Don't get me wrong it well written and in fact that might be the problem, it was TOO well written. Ann's misery over what she was doing seemed all too real. She really IS like a junky, wanting to stop and knowing it hurting her and her family but can't. She NEEDS it. And she's will to risk everything for it.
Hmm...who knew sex with Shego was THAT good? Well I guess Ann does, huh? If there ever is a sequel to this fic it'll be interesting to see how James reacts when he finds out. Not to mention Kim. Man that's not going to be prett at all.
So nice one shot, just a bit of a downer but seeing as how that was most likel the point you pulled it off quite well.
97BlackbirdWow. Well that was...kind of depressing actually. Don't get me wrong it well written and in fact that might be the problem, it was TOO well written. Ann's misery over what she was doing seemed all too real. She really IS like a junky, wanting to stop and knowing it hurting her and her family but can't. She NEEDS it. And she's will to risk everything for it.
Hmm...who knew sex with Shego was THAT good? Well I guess Ann does, huh? If there ever is a sequel to this fic it'll be interesting to see how James reacts when he finds out. Not to mention Kim. Man that's not going to be prett at all.
So nice one shot, just a bit of a downer but seeing as how that was most likel the point you pulled it off quite well.
6/22/2008 c1 10Thoughts13
that was wicked awesome, and a wonderful oneshot, though I'd like to know how exactly it got started. Hope you visit this sometime later. cheers
10Thoughts13that was wicked awesome, and a wonderful oneshot, though I'd like to know how exactly it got started. Hope you visit this sometime later. cheers
6/11/2008 c1 Solarstone
For MrP sake's, I hope he finds out soon and takes action. He certainly deserves better than some lying, cheating wife who feels no remorse. I felt most bad for him.
For MrP sake's, I hope he finds out soon and takes action. He certainly deserves better than some lying, cheating wife who feels no remorse. I felt most bad for him.
6/11/2008 c1 10HecatonchiresLM
I liked it, very dark, twisted and sexy. Should probably be rated M for the rating nazis, but meh.
10HecatonchiresLMI liked it, very dark, twisted and sexy. Should probably be rated M for the rating nazis, but meh.
6/11/2008 c1 Jason Barnett
Doesn't sound like it should be a problem to stop it really. It doesn't read like Anne will actually be able to stop the guilt and Shego said she was gone if Anne didn't. So it's out of her hands.
Doesn't sound like it should be a problem to stop it really. It doesn't read like Anne will actually be able to stop the guilt and Shego said she was gone if Anne didn't. So it's out of her hands.