
6/12/2008 c1 nuthin
that was an interesting story.
that was an interesting story.
6/12/2008 c1
2animepotter
Wow. can't say beautiful, because it aint all happy and mushy, but i can say it's AMAZING. Ad the sad thing is, this actually happens to so many people! but you've captured that sense of longing and vague despair wen you realise you can't have what you want PERFECTLY.
This one's going straight to my favourites! Hope to read more of suc brilliant stuff!
There's just one thing off, that i'm certain you can edit, and change: in the last line, you've misspelled 'abruptly' as 'abruptedly'

Wow. can't say beautiful, because it aint all happy and mushy, but i can say it's AMAZING. Ad the sad thing is, this actually happens to so many people! but you've captured that sense of longing and vague despair wen you realise you can't have what you want PERFECTLY.
This one's going straight to my favourites! Hope to read more of suc brilliant stuff!
There's just one thing off, that i'm certain you can edit, and change: in the last line, you've misspelled 'abruptly' as 'abruptedly'