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4/9/2012 c8 Inuyashiisawesome
Dude bloody update this story. When are you going to update this story. I want to read more chapters.
12/21/2010 c8 luna
O!M!G! u just had to end it with a cliff hanger! uuuuurrrrrrrgggggggg keep up this amazing work
10/26/2009 c8 3bleachbabe03
OMG OMG OMG OMG

I CAN NOT WAIT(I mean it when i say this) FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
4/2/2009 c7 7animeaddict2323232
You def. need more reviewers cause this fic is rockin! lol. Thanks for the chappy, liked it tons

-Anime-
9/7/2008 c4 animeaddict2323232
Take your time. I myself am having trouble as well
9/5/2008 c3 Cristal Gonzalez
PLEASE (PLEASE) MAKE MORE. SO ROMANTIC AND HALARIOUS. HURY (HURRY)

BYE, COCONUT

P.S. COCONUT IS MY NICKNAME
7/26/2008 c3 4k101
HEY!

WAT BOUT THE REST OF THE STORY!
6/24/2008 c3 ThunderRiver411
This is a great story. I'm working on one too. Check it out sometime.
6/18/2008 c3 37Ill Lasanga
Not good.

Not good at all.

The little to none action is very dry, I suggest spicing it up by using a theasaurus or getting a bit more discriptive. The characters seem to be talking fast, and you could stand to slow down a bit with more detail. I have no idea what you're getting to with the title, but I'll wait until I see where the plot is going. Nice story if you look past all that, though.

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6/18/2008 c3 The Frozen Nightingale
there's a new dp movie coming out? i didn't know. and nice story btw
6/16/2008 c2 7animeaddict2323232
Pretty cute and sweet. Please continue
6/13/2008 c2 1Phantom'sShadow94
I really like your story so far. Keep it up and update soon.
6/12/2008 c1 11TPcrazy
How old are they then? because Danny and Sam have known each other since like, ever. So this is kinda confusing. Update!

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