for Angels of My Demons: Prologue1/10/2011 c9 Dinny93
Humm, so have you actually started "Angels of My Demons" yet? Because this all seems very interesting and I'd like to know what happens next please :)
Dinny
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Humm, so have you actually started "Angels of My Demons" yet? Because this all seems very interesting and I'd like to know what happens next please :)
Dinny
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6/21/2010 c6 
18Winterluna
You have had some random placement of commas in the last few chapters. But otherwise you seem to be proofreading well.
Secondly, the motto if you will is:
There is no emotion. There is only peace.
Other than that, you've got me hooked still.
-WL
18WinterlunaYou have had some random placement of commas in the last few chapters. But otherwise you seem to be proofreading well.
Secondly, the motto if you will is:
There is no emotion. There is only peace.
Other than that, you've got me hooked still.
-WL
2/27/2010 c9 8Mireilles3
Oh boy :) Obi-Wan is coming to interfere, and while Vader is never a good thing, this one doesn't seem lost completely, not as long as he has his family anyway.
I hope this remains so after the upcoming confrontation :)
Keep it up!
Love
Mireille
8Mireilles3Oh boy :) Obi-Wan is coming to interfere, and while Vader is never a good thing, this one doesn't seem lost completely, not as long as he has his family anyway.
I hope this remains so after the upcoming confrontation :)
Keep it up!
Love
Mireille
2/6/2010 c8 8Mireilles3
Hm, interesting so far. I hope we'll get to see a lot of their family life in that kind of setting as the children grow from babies to adults :)
more?
Love
mireille
8Mireilles3Hm, interesting so far. I hope we'll get to see a lot of their family life in that kind of setting as the children grow from babies to adults :)
more?
Love
mireille
12/29/2009 c8 104Above the Winter Moonlight
That was very good, wow, eight prologues? Well I can't wait until the next chapter so update as soon as you possibly can.
~Blaze~
104Above the Winter MoonlightThat was very good, wow, eight prologues? Well I can't wait until the next chapter so update as soon as you possibly can.
~Blaze~
12/22/2009 c7 104Above the Winter Moonlight
That was good, update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter.
~Blaze~
104Above the Winter MoonlightThat was good, update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter.
~Blaze~