
5/23/2011 c1 Somebody
Aww! This is so cute! I love it!
Aww! This is so cute! I love it!
9/13/2008 c1 Wergar
hi im new to fan fiction but ive read all the percy jacksons and all your work to do with him. i think you r an amazing writer and has a good future. i cant wait for the next chapter of new beginings and i would like to see wat hapeens with lorrin.
hi im new to fan fiction but ive read all the percy jacksons and all your work to do with him. i think you r an amazing writer and has a good future. i cant wait for the next chapter of new beginings and i would like to see wat hapeens with lorrin.
9/13/2008 c1
19PennyOfTheWild
'The whole world was just in a huge, downward spiral. And naturally, it all had to be about me. Oh joy.'
I loved that line ... it's so ... Percy :D
You kept them all in character very well ... I really liked the way you wrote Juniper :)

'The whole world was just in a huge, downward spiral. And naturally, it all had to be about me. Oh joy.'
I loved that line ... it's so ... Percy :D
You kept them all in character very well ... I really liked the way you wrote Juniper :)
7/30/2008 c1 lizzie
well, i liked the story. percabeth is awesome in so any ways, but the story could have had at least some kind of action. but anyway, it was pretty good. keep on writing!
well, i liked the story. percabeth is awesome in so any ways, but the story could have had at least some kind of action. but anyway, it was pretty good. keep on writing!
7/24/2008 c1
22Sa Rart
I do review every time I read a chapter of any of your stories! I agree, other people should, too.
Down to buissness: Great job. I liked the way that you wrote it, but just one thing: Annabeth is a little bit out of character. She doesn't normally act like that. But nice job. I like your oneshots, but don't neglect new beginnings!

I do review every time I read a chapter of any of your stories! I agree, other people should, too.
Down to buissness: Great job. I liked the way that you wrote it, but just one thing: Annabeth is a little bit out of character. She doesn't normally act like that. But nice job. I like your oneshots, but don't neglect new beginnings!
7/8/2008 c1 adam
really good though you should and more it would make up for a major percabeth story
really good though you should and more it would make up for a major percabeth story
6/25/2008 c1
5toffeecakesxox
Yeah, I know what you mean about the reviews; I mean 20+ hits and only 99 reviews. -sigh- Oh well. Anyways, enough of me, I loved this fic! It showed the comfort, but still had hints of Percabeth in it. ^^ The end was my favorite, and the fact that Annabeth's natural beauty overcomes Aprhodite's any day. ^^

Yeah, I know what you mean about the reviews; I mean 20+ hits and only 99 reviews. -sigh- Oh well. Anyways, enough of me, I loved this fic! It showed the comfort, but still had hints of Percabeth in it. ^^ The end was my favorite, and the fact that Annabeth's natural beauty overcomes Aprhodite's any day. ^^
6/15/2008 c1
1Yoshi with a bazooka
That was great. I love your writing style. I guess now I have to check out "New Beginnings".

That was great. I love your writing style. I guess now I have to check out "New Beginnings".
6/14/2008 c1 lollie bee
i love percabeth FanFics. Please add another chapter!
lolliebee
i love percabeth FanFics. Please add another chapter!
lolliebee