for Alice5/6/2021 c1 MS
Oh. My. God.
This was so amazing and sweet, I'm crying!
Oh. My. God.
This was so amazing and sweet, I'm crying!
1/30/2016 c1 Guest
Looooooove it!
Looooooove it!
3/25/2010 c1 KayDeexoxo
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your oneshot was really great!
I meant please visit: w.heavenbound213.
your oneshot was really great!
3/25/2010 c1 KayDeexoxo
I like it but you could have added some dialouge between them and when James is arrogant while trying to impress Alice;)
Please visit: /heavenbound213
I like it but you could have added some dialouge between them and when James is arrogant while trying to impress Alice;)
Please visit: /heavenbound213
6/22/2008 c1 
41Wotcher-Tonks
This was wonderful, and I love how you created a Longbottom child named after Neville's mum. Alice and James in your story are very likable, real people and I hope you will continue to write more of these two.
-Wotcher
41Wotcher-TonksThis was wonderful, and I love how you created a Longbottom child named after Neville's mum. Alice and James in your story are very likable, real people and I hope you will continue to write more of these two.
-Wotcher
6/22/2008 c1 20Dodger Gilmore
Aw, this was adorable. I love the idea of James ending up with Neville's daughter. And this was just a very awesome take on it all. Very nice.
20Dodger GilmoreAw, this was adorable. I love the idea of James ending up with Neville's daughter. And this was just a very awesome take on it all. Very nice.
6/22/2008 c1 37A Catholic Girl
Wow, one of my major OCs is Alice Pomona Longbottom the II! I was quite surprised upon seeing this. I already have several stories about her posted, and a James/Alice pairing going on. I loved your oneshot here!
37A Catholic GirlWow, one of my major OCs is Alice Pomona Longbottom the II! I was quite surprised upon seeing this. I already have several stories about her posted, and a James/Alice pairing going on. I loved your oneshot here!
6/21/2008 c1 13hondagirl
Winterlude, i just want to say thank you for your next generation stories. You are one of the few author on here that I think adequedly does them, all the next gen, justice. I adored this piece. I don't even know Alice but I feel like I do, seeing her through James eyes. I like the way you covered their whole life, yet kept it simple and sweet. Never thought about James ending up with a Longbottom, but now i kind of like that idea. A great read. Definetly added to the C2.
-honda
13hondagirlWinterlude, i just want to say thank you for your next generation stories. You are one of the few author on here that I think adequedly does them, all the next gen, justice. I adored this piece. I don't even know Alice but I feel like I do, seeing her through James eyes. I like the way you covered their whole life, yet kept it simple and sweet. Never thought about James ending up with a Longbottom, but now i kind of like that idea. A great read. Definetly added to the C2.
-honda
6/15/2008 c1 liveonluna
Aww. That was sweet. I never have read an Alice and James. So that was new for me, but I liked it! =D
Aww. That was sweet. I never have read an Alice and James. So that was new for me, but I liked it! =D