
2/21/2011 c6 nkwhimseycornergmail.com
super well-done. totally angsty and deep, but still totally in character.
i read tons of gibbs-din fics, and it's rare to find one that doesn't cross the line into schmaltz. gibbs is capable of a lot of deep, even paternal feelings for his agents, but i don't think even under life and death situations would he be able to manage goo, especially verbal goo! he would hide his concern under impatience or anger, or just plain show it.
a new cell phone during SWAK, a chuck under the chin or an 'atta boy- maybe even a chocolate chip cookie from all the way across town.
super well-done. totally angsty and deep, but still totally in character.
i read tons of gibbs-din fics, and it's rare to find one that doesn't cross the line into schmaltz. gibbs is capable of a lot of deep, even paternal feelings for his agents, but i don't think even under life and death situations would he be able to manage goo, especially verbal goo! he would hide his concern under impatience or anger, or just plain show it.
a new cell phone during SWAK, a chuck under the chin or an 'atta boy- maybe even a chocolate chip cookie from all the way across town.
1/15/2011 c5 mykidmom
Hi just wanted to point out in the last line of chp 5 you have a word sbpiy I think it is suppose to be 'about' thought you might want to know...
Hi just wanted to point out in the last line of chp 5 you have a word sbpiy I think it is suppose to be 'about' thought you might want to know...
6/11/2010 c6 guest
loved it! well done!
loved it! well done!
2/26/2010 c6
128Mulderette
I adored this story. Great Tony angst and I loved your characterizations. You did an excellent job with this.

I adored this story. Great Tony angst and I loved your characterizations. You did an excellent job with this.
9/1/2009 c4 wandamarie
it is a good one i fell sorry for Tony but he should of listen to GIbbs thanks on to the next chapter thanks
it is a good one i fell sorry for Tony but he should of listen to GIbbs thanks on to the next chapter thanks