for TLC Gibbs' Style6/19/2008 c5 poohbear123
poor Tony oatmeal gross What will gibbs do to him now? Think he needs so one to love him and a little discipline in his live. He did not get it when he was young. love your story.
poor Tony oatmeal gross What will gibbs do to him now? Think he needs so one to love him and a little discipline in his live. He did not get it when he was young. love your story.
6/19/2008 c5 
26Stroma
Another great chapter, love the way the characters interact with each other. Poor McGee caught in the middle. Think he could be wearing that oatmeal if he's not careful. Glad you update so quickly.
26StromaAnother great chapter, love the way the characters interact with each other. Poor McGee caught in the middle. Think he could be wearing that oatmeal if he's not careful. Glad you update so quickly.
6/19/2008 c5 16tvdunlop
nicely done. i like the interaction, and hope you continue updating frequently
16tvdunlopnicely done. i like the interaction, and hope you continue updating frequently
6/19/2008 c5 19BravoKate
As usual, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Though, again as usual, I do feel the need to groan at the way you're stringing us along, here! Just on principle. ;-)
But it looks like we're finally closer to seeing some sort of resolution to Tony's misunderstanding. I can't wait to see Gibbs's reaction! I love the gruff caring he shows here, and Tony's complete inablity to just accept it for what it is. And the final scene was hilariously in character! Can't wait for the next piece of this story!
19BravoKateAs usual, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Though, again as usual, I do feel the need to groan at the way you're stringing us along, here! Just on principle. ;-)
But it looks like we're finally closer to seeing some sort of resolution to Tony's misunderstanding. I can't wait to see Gibbs's reaction! I love the gruff caring he shows here, and Tony's complete inablity to just accept it for what it is. And the final scene was hilariously in character! Can't wait for the next piece of this story!
6/19/2008 c5 Sorgina
That was a good chapter that, particularly liked the bit about the cold porridge and Ducky elaborating on one of his stories
That was a good chapter that, particularly liked the bit about the cold porridge and Ducky elaborating on one of his stories
6/18/2008 c4 15vanishingp2000
Oh dear, poor Tony. I do feel for him. Really enjoying this, thanks. VP.
15vanishingp2000Oh dear, poor Tony. I do feel for him. Really enjoying this, thanks. VP.
6/18/2008 c4 24Belker
I like the way Tony slowly realizes that he has lost a lot of hours to feverinduced oblivion. The horror to get the notion that you've been hoisted to the toilet without even remembering it...! ;)
Keep it up!
Love/Belker
24BelkerI like the way Tony slowly realizes that he has lost a lot of hours to feverinduced oblivion. The horror to get the notion that you've been hoisted to the toilet without even remembering it...! ;)
Keep it up!
Love/Belker
6/18/2008 c4 26Stroma
Another very good chapter, poor Tony. Hate to think what Gibbs has planned for him.
26StromaAnother very good chapter, poor Tony. Hate to think what Gibbs has planned for him.
6/18/2008 c4 19BravoKate
OK, evil doesn't even begin to cover it! These cliffhangers are *killing* me! Seriously, though, this was another great chapter. All of your characters feel so real to me - I know it's a cliche, but it really does feel like watching a deleted scene from the show. And...it has to be said again: Poor Tony! Oh, well, here's hoping that Gibbs will finally straighten him out - in typical, gruff Gibbs fashion, of course! *Is eagerly looking forward to more*
19BravoKateOK, evil doesn't even begin to cover it! These cliffhangers are *killing* me! Seriously, though, this was another great chapter. All of your characters feel so real to me - I know it's a cliche, but it really does feel like watching a deleted scene from the show. And...it has to be said again: Poor Tony! Oh, well, here's hoping that Gibbs will finally straighten him out - in typical, gruff Gibbs fashion, of course! *Is eagerly looking forward to more*
6/18/2008 c4 hawngirl
oh come on don't leave me hanging, talk about torture. I hope tony now realises that ducky and gibbs care for him. but i must say " poor tony". please update soon
oh come on don't leave me hanging, talk about torture. I hope tony now realises that ducky and gibbs care for him. but i must say " poor tony". please update soon