for Empty Handed3/17/2009 c1 
24Brulian4ever
WOW! That was so great! You captured what Brooke must have been feeling in that moment so perfectly! I wanted to cry for her while I was reading this! Really great!
24Brulian4everWOW! That was so great! You captured what Brooke must have been feeling in that moment so perfectly! I wanted to cry for her while I was reading this! Really great!
1/7/2009 c1 2BloomingMissy
Great story. That's pretty much what I thought Brooke is probably feeling after the kiss!
Keep writing, you have a gift. You are able to capture her emotions and put them into proper words. :)
2BloomingMissyGreat story. That's pretty much what I thought Brooke is probably feeling after the kiss!
Keep writing, you have a gift. You are able to capture her emotions and put them into proper words. :)
10/14/2008 c1 4Unflavored
You should definitely write some more, i really like the way you portrayed Brooke. The story is almost broke my heart, it was too sad lol but I love drama! You should try writing another one! I know I'd read it =)
4UnflavoredYou should definitely write some more, i really like the way you portrayed Brooke. The story is almost broke my heart, it was too sad lol but I love drama! You should try writing another one! I know I'd read it =)
9/1/2008 c1 3madeinoctober
Wow. This was amazing. I love how you portrayed her emotions for people to better understand what Brooke is really going through (even if it was your own interpretation, but I think we all agree anyway). Lucas is an ass. Gah!
3madeinoctoberWow. This was amazing. I love how you portrayed her emotions for people to better understand what Brooke is really going through (even if it was your own interpretation, but I think we all agree anyway). Lucas is an ass. Gah!
8/13/2008 c1 10Coffee.With.Cinnamon
Whoa... this is angsty, you weren't joking.
And the thought you tried to convey is very clear. I feel like this should have a more physical resolution though, in terms of an actual action/reaction to B's musings, and it has nothing to do with involving Lucas. Just... B needs to act upon her departure from the Egypt river everyone seems to talk about.
Also, if you'd maybe add some more descriptive imagery... nevermind. I like the story. Will write you more in an e-mail.
10Coffee.With.CinnamonWhoa... this is angsty, you weren't joking.
And the thought you tried to convey is very clear. I feel like this should have a more physical resolution though, in terms of an actual action/reaction to B's musings, and it has nothing to do with involving Lucas. Just... B needs to act upon her departure from the Egypt river everyone seems to talk about.
Also, if you'd maybe add some more descriptive imagery... nevermind. I like the story. Will write you more in an e-mail.
6/16/2008 c1 70yaba
aw, this was such a heart wrenching one shot. It really made me sad. I really liked the reality of it and Brooke's realizations. It was very well written as well. keep writing, this was awesome as a first story!
Yana
70yabaaw, this was such a heart wrenching one shot. It really made me sad. I really liked the reality of it and Brooke's realizations. It was very well written as well. keep writing, this was awesome as a first story!
Yana
6/16/2008 c1 1always.me.britt
ohmygoodnes... this is breathtaking. That BL kiss broke my heart a little bit, because Lucas treated Brooke like some wh*re and she basically admitted she was in love with hi9m "And Lucas Scott was the one boy I would've lost it for..."
Gah. D*mn you Mark Schwann. For giving us total Brucas love in season three, and take it all away and try to make it mean nothing. But it still means something to me, and to you (the author of this amazing fic), and to all the Brucas fans out there who know that Lucas Scott is the guy for Brooke Davis, and people who are meant to be together always find their way in end.
Great story! xoxo, Britt
1always.me.brittohmygoodnes... this is breathtaking. That BL kiss broke my heart a little bit, because Lucas treated Brooke like some wh*re and she basically admitted she was in love with hi9m "And Lucas Scott was the one boy I would've lost it for..."
Gah. D*mn you Mark Schwann. For giving us total Brucas love in season three, and take it all away and try to make it mean nothing. But it still means something to me, and to you (the author of this amazing fic), and to all the Brucas fans out there who know that Lucas Scott is the guy for Brooke Davis, and people who are meant to be together always find their way in end.
Great story! xoxo, Britt
6/15/2008 c1 1babygirlak
could plz make a lucas POV of this story. and it was a bit angsty but well written
1babygirlakcould plz make a lucas POV of this story. and it was a bit angsty but well written
6/15/2008 c1 8evergloweyes
Wow. That was really sad, like depressing. I hate the idea of Brooke thinking that what she and Lucas had was never real, because we all know it was. Lucas has never acted as happy after he and Brooke broke up. I would love to see a sequel to this of maybe Lucas's thoughts or a conversation between the two where Lucas tells her that what they had was real and that maybe it could be real again. Obviously this was really good, but sad endings make me sad.
8evergloweyesWow. That was really sad, like depressing. I hate the idea of Brooke thinking that what she and Lucas had was never real, because we all know it was. Lucas has never acted as happy after he and Brooke broke up. I would love to see a sequel to this of maybe Lucas's thoughts or a conversation between the two where Lucas tells her that what they had was real and that maybe it could be real again. Obviously this was really good, but sad endings make me sad.
6/15/2008 c1 othfan326
nice oneshot. sad, but really good. especially for your first fic.
very emotional and very well written.
great job!
nice oneshot. sad, but really good. especially for your first fic.
very emotional and very well written.
great job!