for Eternal Being9/15/2010 c5 keemirain
muahahah the ending was lovely! and I loved it! I loved this! good job 8) I'm more a Rate: M girl but iono, i was lurking round and clicked your profile :D
muahahah the ending was lovely! and I loved it! I loved this! good job 8) I'm more a Rate: M girl but iono, i was lurking round and clicked your profile :D
11/14/2009 c5 didush
This was great!
I love the idea... im soo happy they are together and im sure they will make it!
I would love to read a sequel!
This was great!
I love the idea... im soo happy they are together and im sure they will make it!
I would love to read a sequel!
11/12/2009 c1 didush
OMG cool i love it!
i didn't really understand whats going on but im sure i will...
really good!
OMG cool i love it!
i didn't really understand whats going on but im sure i will...
really good!
12/18/2008 c5 
18CharminglyShar
first i forgot to say in the last chapter that i lovd how ryan was showing some caring for hs sster next this cha[pter was amazing i would really really love to see a seaul and see what happens to te from here on out and hopfully tere families will remember tem an dyea you have to do a sequal lol. oh and if you could check out the stories o wrote and give me your opinions in review form that would be great. your an amazing writer and i would love to know what yu think of my stories ok so i shall awat a sequal i hope lol great job
18CharminglySharfirst i forgot to say in the last chapter that i lovd how ryan was showing some caring for hs sster next this cha[pter was amazing i would really really love to see a seaul and see what happens to te from here on out and hopfully tere families will remember tem an dyea you have to do a sequal lol. oh and if you could check out the stories o wrote and give me your opinions in review form that would be great. your an amazing writer and i would love to know what yu think of my stories ok so i shall awat a sequal i hope lol great job
12/18/2008 c4 CharminglyShar
wow this is so amazing i glad we found out exactly what had happene d and i cant wait to find out what happens to sharpay and troy although isnt it a bit weird troys actually jkkissing a 200 year old and shes in love with a 17 year old? idk anyway this is so amazing i love it you keep me up s late reading your stories there just amazing haha but why did troys hands glow before i dont understand those parts
wow this is so amazing i glad we found out exactly what had happene d and i cant wait to find out what happens to sharpay and troy although isnt it a bit weird troys actually jkkissing a 200 year old and shes in love with a 17 year old? idk anyway this is so amazing i love it you keep me up s late reading your stories there just amazing haha but why did troys hands glow before i dont understand those parts
12/18/2008 c3 CharminglyShar
hmm are the dreas troy having actually memories of a past life? greart job i am loving this
hmm are the dreas troy having actually memories of a past life? greart job i am loving this
12/18/2008 c2 CharminglyShar
ok so now its reveelaed but i have a few questions...if the are always 16 wont the people around them kind of notice that or do they always move on to new towns and stuff? there hs to be some loophole or something and what was with what happened with troy at the beginning what was that about?
ok so now its reveelaed but i have a few questions...if the are always 16 wont the people around them kind of notice that or do they always move on to new towns and stuff? there hs to be some loophole or something and what was with what happened with troy at the beginning what was that about?
12/18/2008 c1 CharminglyShar
hmm its really good although i am a bit confsed about whats going on with sharpay although my guess is that she cane somehow live forever idk bt anyway cant wait to read more and i hope to ind out the answeres to my questtions and u wush ryan were more caring towards his sister and uh i loved how you started t out with what i guess is oing to happen at the end of the story although i hope she doesnt kill herelf but yea great start
hmm its really good although i am a bit confsed about whats going on with sharpay although my guess is that she cane somehow live forever idk bt anyway cant wait to read more and i hope to ind out the answeres to my questtions and u wush ryan were more caring towards his sister and uh i loved how you started t out with what i guess is oing to happen at the end of the story although i hope she doesnt kill herelf but yea great start
10/16/2008 c5 19CanonAntithesis
That was perfect! I loved that they stole a car and it really was the perfect way to end the story. I also really loved that little look that Sharpay's mom had that said or didn't said that she realized, at least on a subconscious level, what had happened.
I look forward to reading what you come up with next.
19CanonAntithesisThat was perfect! I loved that they stole a car and it really was the perfect way to end the story. I also really loved that little look that Sharpay's mom had that said or didn't said that she realized, at least on a subconscious level, what had happened.
I look forward to reading what you come up with next.
10/7/2008 c5 12drinklotsoffluids
Hey there,
completely awesome chapter
i just love this story
and i'm sorry i hadnt gotten time to review until now
but your stories are always captivating and completely radiant
especially the scrupulous description about the white room.
gosh
x
yeshi
12drinklotsoffluidsHey there,
completely awesome chapter
i just love this story
and i'm sorry i hadnt gotten time to review until now
but your stories are always captivating and completely radiant
especially the scrupulous description about the white room.
gosh
x
yeshi
10/7/2008 c5 5xEdwards Fallen AngelX
that was really cool im really happy that they ended up together
5xEdwards Fallen AngelXthat was really cool im really happy that they ended up together
9/20/2008 c4 9troypazash
Great super long chapter! Finally we know what happened to them! And how sad! And the ending between Troypay was great! I just loved how Troy really believed that he as meant to do this for her, I'm glad he didn't run off but truly believed her. I can't wait until the next chapter!
9troypazashGreat super long chapter! Finally we know what happened to them! And how sad! And the ending between Troypay was great! I just loved how Troy really believed that he as meant to do this for her, I'm glad he didn't run off but truly believed her. I can't wait until the next chapter!
9/18/2008 c4 5xEdwards Fallen AngelX
im speechless i honestly dont know what to say its so good your writing is amazing i couldnt stop reading dieng to know what happens next wow im looking forword to the next or last chapter its so sad but so beautiful. i cant believe troy did that for her wow i want to cry i know im such a dork its just so amazing and breath taking the whole time i was reading i held my breath anticioating what might happen wow you are an amazing author and the vivid images you put into my mind when you write its wow
5xEdwards Fallen AngelXim speechless i honestly dont know what to say its so good your writing is amazing i couldnt stop reading dieng to know what happens next wow im looking forword to the next or last chapter its so sad but so beautiful. i cant believe troy did that for her wow i want to cry i know im such a dork its just so amazing and breath taking the whole time i was reading i held my breath anticioating what might happen wow you are an amazing author and the vivid images you put into my mind when you write its wow